kinikeensSigned | Chapter : 18 | Date : 08/11/08
Heh a lovely story, very long and angsty, sometimes a bit too much angst, but then thats just what i think. I still enjoyed it, kept hoping the net chapter would bring me the fluff i desired and it didn't really come till the very last lines lol, but still i kept me reading. |
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aditivatsSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 02/11/08
I have just started reading this story and i m simply loving it. Thumbs up for u  |
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manitildeSigned | Chapter : 18 | Date : 30/10/08
that was amazing. seriously, one of the best angsty love stories I've ever read. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 18 | Date : 09/09/08
That was far too frustrating. Hermione made Ron and Harry both look like schmucks, displaying such a height and depth of selfishness and childishness that I can\'t believe that was Hermione.
I read through to the end, yep, because I couldn\'t look away. Morbid fascination. |
Author Feedback: Well I'm sorry it frustrated you so and I'm a bit uncertain as to whether I should thank you or not for sticking with it and kept on reading. But I'd be lying if I was to say my writing isn't there to frustrate. In fact, all writing, I feel, should be there to elicit a reaction from a reader, any reader.
In any case, I'm sorry you didn't enjoy this so much, but I hope you've learnt some more about yourself and perhaps even myself through reading this.
Thank you for your review and constructive criticism. |
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BJanelleSigned | Chapter : 5 | Date : 10/08/08
well it DEFINATELY has more drama than any of the book/movies!!!! |
Author Feedback: It does, doesn't it? I'm sorry, that sort of just happened. It seems like all my fics are out of my control, doesn't it? Don't know what that says about me as a writer. But thank you for your reviews, they truly mean a lot.  |
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BJanelleSigned | Chapter : 4 | Date : 10/08/08
well... This was QUITE unexpected!!! I like how you seem to get inspirations from things that are in your life... |
Author Feedback: Thank you! As someone close to me has said, you can only write what you've experienced.
Thank you for your review. |
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BJanelleSigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 10/08/08
Well I'm caught up already.... Wish desperately that I could write like that!!!! |
Author Feedback: Aw shucks.
Thank you, I'm glad you think so. I'm actually re-reading some of my work and I'm not exactly liking what I'm seeing. But I suppose I've just evolved as a writer. I'm glad you think I'm half-decent.
Thank you for your review! |
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BJanelleSigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 10/08/08
Another good one.... I should be able to find a better adjective than good shouldn't I??? |
Author Feedback: Haha, it's alright. Or rather. It's all good. 
Alright, I'm sorry. That sounded witty in my head.
Thanks for the review. |
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BJanelleSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 10/08/08
the is so goood.... it was so realistic.... I\\\'m not really sure how else to put it... so much better then the stupid movies. |
Author Feedback: Haha, the movies aren't so bad, I think, but everyone's entitled to their own opinions. And I suppose if you're placing my writing about something else, that's a compliment. So thank you. And thank you for your review. |
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oh my gosh....
that was absolutely breath taking...
i was so speechless when i read your fic...
its so beautiful...
you know, in a way i kinda understand what you were going through...
you see, i fell in love with someone who doesn't even know that i did everything for him...
at first it was just a silly admiration that i felt for him when i was in grade 5 to my first year in highschool...so i wasn't expecting that we would be classmates in the second year and most of all, i never expected that some things would happen between us...
we got really close and we had something that was really unexplainable...
he was my sweet-torture...
he would do things that made me completely confuse about the base of our relationship...
sometimes i would say that we're friends but sometimes i would say we're more than that...
he made me feel things i never thought existed...
it was worst when summer came...
he torture me by showering me sweet talks and gestures but never fully explained why he was doing it...nor telling me what he really feels...
but now...it's over...
he hurted me by making me happy...
you see, i was so in love with him that it got to the point where i was really afraid to loose him...and i knew that i can't really have him when i don't even own him...
i didn't even know what i was to him...
so, in order to help myself i tried to end it but each time i do, i would break down and would almost beg him to come back...
but i was a fool back then...and it was good that i realized it sooner or else...i don't know...
so...maybe in a way i understand what you're going through... :]
so, a very spectacular fic you made...
congratulations... |
Author Feedback: Wow, that's quite a story you've got there, and an incredible experience with someone else. I'm sorry about the pain you obviously went through with him, and am glad you've gotten through it, and hope you've become stronger.
Thank you so much for sharing your story, and appreciating mine. |
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I have no compunctions about saying that was one of the most painful things I've ever read in my entire life. Painful because, except for the happy ending, I've felt exactly what Harry felt. I've hated my friend so much because he had the one thing I wanted most in this world, I've been obsessed, I've hated her so much because I couldn't have her, I hated her because she never seemed to know or care what I truly thought about her. I know now that she never did, and never will. I've gotten over it, but I know the pain very well. And I hate this story because of how true it is. Very well done. |
Author Feedback: Wow, thank you very much, that's quite the compliment! In all honesty, I hadn't been sure if I was going insane or not, both with feeling and with writing this fic. But I suppose it's for people like and I to get these things down and look back. I'm really glad that you seem to have gotten over it, it's a life-changing experience that some people don't get out of positively.
Again, thank you so much for your encouragement, read, and review. |
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prue1912Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 02/02/08
love it, love where you're going with it! looking forward to reading more. |
Author Feedback: Thank you very much! |
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arukasSigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 28/01/08
Wow, that's certainly a way to break the tension... kinda like blowing up a damn is a good way to get a drink.
Frickin awesome though, great scene! |
Author Feedback: Hahah, thank you, that was a bit of a difficult scene to write but I'm glad you liked it.
Thank you for the read and review! |
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arukasSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 28/01/08
I have a confession, i am totally reading this fic because the trailer for it was AWSUM!!!1! It was THE most cinematic thing i've ever seen on youtube... well except for professional movie trailers.
And im glad im reading this now, the dynamic between Harry and Hermione is fantastic. I do have one question though
She raised his coffee and sipped.
Is that line a typo or did she steal his coffee? Regardless its totally inspired me to have hermione drink harry's coffee in a fic of mine. 
Tom
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Author Feedback: Hah, well, thank you, I'm really glad you thought so.
I suppose that was just a typo, many apologies, I seem to be making so often lately.
Thank you for the read and review, you're welcome for the small inspiration there. |
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chelley83Signed | Chapter : 18 | Date : 01/12/07
well i thought this story was very good...i hope everything worked out between you and the person you were dedicating this to at the end of each chapter...anyways thanks for writing this and i can't wait to read your other stuff...thanks again |
Author Feedback: Ah well, things have gotten complicated but thank you for your best wishes and thank you so very much for the read and review. |
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