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are you going to continue this masterpiece? here or elsewhere, i would like to see where everything is going. |
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JimmyUnsigned | Chapter : 20 | Date : 14/08/07
I in joy your story a lot! Please keep up the great work! Jimmy |
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usha88Signed | Chapter : 9 | Date : 17/12/06
How very cute. This was a very sweet chapter. Lovely job. Great. I thought it was sweet how Hermione took him around. Hm...I guess that does make sense that Hermioen would be very well off. Great job on this chapter. |
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talk about hooks. man i wish i had more time so i could finish what is posted. thanx for the tale so far |
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usha88Signed | Chapter : 6 | Date : 22/11/06
Well it is good that Hermione is being logical. I am super glad for this story. Wow...I have fourteen more chapters to read and then some more if you keep updating. I am so excited. |
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usha88Signed | Chapter : 5 | Date : 22/11/06
Oh well, I didn't remember that. That mus be horribley confusing for Hermione...to love two people. I do have to say that I have never had that situation, so I can't say that I relate. Well, this was a great chapter. And I really want to know what Ron's reaction will be. |
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usha88Signed | Chapter : 4 | Date : 22/11/06
That was a great chapter. I am now remembering more and more of this story. Lovely job. I can't wait to read more and more of this chapter... |
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usha88Signed | Chapter : 3 | Date : 22/11/06
I do remember now. I also remember that I think that Ron gets angry. Well I am super excited to read more and am loving this story more and more again... |
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usha88Signed | Chapter : 2 | Date : 22/11/06
Well, the more I read this, the more that is coming back to me. I had forgotten that Ginny and Harry and Ron and Hermioen had all started going out. I do remember that it changed somewhere in the story. Well, I think this is wondeful... |
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usha88Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 22/11/06
Well, seeing as I have completely forgotten what all this story is about, I'm goign to re-read all twenty chapters again. I have missed too much to not remember. THis was a great start and I can't wait to read more.. |
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Wow, didn't see that ending comming. I wonder when he will tell her, she has to find out at some point. Very interesting twist there, can't wait to see where you take it next! |
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that was a good chapter . . .
Harry and Hermione Forever ! ! ! ! ! ! ! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 18/11/06
keeeil that ginny, just kill her be done with it. and kill cho too just because she's an annoying bitch. |
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I understand the argument for sparing Hermione pain. But I've always felt honesty is the best course of action, because it shouldn't be his place to protect her from that.
I mean it was Harry's fault in that he couldn't control his stupid impulses against Snape. His anger was self defeating and it caused the girl he loved to do something horrible.
Thanks for writing,
Matt |
Author Feedback: Good point. Thanks. |
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Ok, I now have more reasons to hate Snape, and unsurprisingly I hate Dumbledore for forcing Harry to deal with Snape.
It is a ludicrous position for Harry to be put in. I don't see how forcing him to lie to Hermione benefits anything. These aren't complaints about your writing. Merely my frustration with how things are going in the story.
Thanks for writing,
Matt |
Author Feedback: Thank you. Your faithfulness in critiquing or reviewing has become something to look forward to. One remark for your consideration. If you loved someone enough and you knew something that might hurt them for no good reason, wouldn't you keep it to yourself by choice? |
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