AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 18/07/06
I absolutely love this. Great concept! I hope all the men out there understand. Mums can be sexy! |
Author Feedback: Thanks! I'm very glad you liked it!
And damn straight, they can!  |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 18/07/06
Now that was quite how. That was very very..naughty. Oh la la.  |
Author Feedback: Hahaha, yes, Hermione was being a naughty, naughty girl. Poor little Harry. 
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 17/07/06
LOL. Is this going to have a sequel or not? That was just too funny and sexy for me. Will we know what kind of punishment Hermione will infict? |
Author Feedback: I'm not planning a sequel atm, but I'm sure neither you nor I have to let our imagination run too far to imagine the night of being dominated that Harry's in for.
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I really loved the ridiculous contrast between the first two paragraphs and the rest of the story. Here comes Harry, loving husband and father, expecting nothing more than a cooked meal or some bonding time with his kid, but no... he gets something else.
I also thought the way you portrayed Hermione in this story was sharp and sexy. It was also slightly amusing. Hermione wielding a whip? I thought the way her character was written was a perfect balance to the way you wrote Harry, who's just completely bewildered by what's happening to him.
In closing, you have written a short, (though debatably sweet), and entertaining story. Good job  |
Author Feedback: Thanks so much for the well-thought-out review! I love hearing exactly what worked (and what didn't, though that's not quite as fun ) my fics. I was particularly hoping people would catch that difference between the first two paragraphs and the rest of the story.
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Haha, kind of hard to picture Hermione like that, but then again, we all know she goes after what she wants 110%. That was just great. "you're a mum now"  Oh man, that fantastic and hysterical! And that title is just awesome! Great story! |
Author Feedback: Yay, thanks! I'm glad you were amused; I was shooting for some silly crack goodness.
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WOAH! hello! wowza, hermione gone randy! that's insane, but very well written. nice one-shot. i'd like you to do a sequel, just another one shot or something. you had a great idea, and caried it out well. great job! |
Author Feedback: LOL! Yeah, it is rather crazy, but I like my crack with a bit of insanity. I'm not planning a sequel atm, though.
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DannySUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 17/07/06
This storie is so hot, thanks for the idea. I really love your stories. |
Author Feedback: Yay! That's the kind of thing every writer secretly longs to hear.
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SOneUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 17/07/06
Wow, this is a great fic, hopefully you will make an next chapter about this, this is so wicked. |
Author Feedback: Hee hee, thanks! I'm glad you liked it! I'm not planning a sequel or anything atm, though.
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Please tell me you're going to continue with this story.It's got a great beginning and I don't feel sorry for Harry in the least. I hope he gets what his wife is going to give him. Keep up the good work. |
Author Feedback: Hahaha, I don't feel sorry for Harry, either. Apparently he needed a bit of waking up, and I'm quite sure he'll end up enjoying it. I'm not currently planning a sequel, though.
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nice, thought it was great how Harry reacted to Hermione with the whip, it was kind of funny. Anyways, nice work. |
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LMAO! OMG I loved that! You're bloody brilliant! Just like Learning Curve was brilliant... and can you believe my daftness? I didn't even realize that you had written Learning Curve as well, until I scrolled down to the bottom of the page! *Slaps self* lol
This was hilarious! Will there be another chapter? I sure hope so!
I love your writing!
-Michelle |
Author Feedback: Yay, I'm so glad you liked it! This is a rather different tone than Learning Curve, so it's no wonder you didn't connect the two; they're both, er, weird, but in pretty different ways.
I'm not planning on another chapter at the moment, though.
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
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Interesting start to your story.. I enjoyed what you've got done so far... Update soon!! |
Author Feedback: Actually, this is just a cracky little one-shot I wrote for a few minutes worth of giggles, and I'm not planning to continue it atm. But thanks for reading and reviewing, I'm glad you liked it! |
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Oh my goodness..Hermione's gone dominatrix..Poor harry, but then again..He loves it.. |
Author Feedback: LOL, yes, he does. Secretly, of course; mums aren't supposed to act like that, after all.
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 17/07/06
wow...that is hot... keep on writing, dear friend. haha... love the sexy mummy-hermione |
Author Feedback: Hee hee hee, thanks! I'm glad you liked. |
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