Brilliant fic! I ahve read a lot of fics in which hermione breaks up with ron (or her current date) and ends up with harry, but this one was somehow different, here harry realises his feelings "after" she broke up with ron and not before, i kind of like it more that way. Keep writing!

very very very sweet!!! I loved it. I loved how she said 'it was you... always you." Brilliant

*G* That sounds like Ron. & Why would he get along with Hemione for a long term? They are better friends than anything else.

Lisa

Very sweet. Poor Ron, you did a great job of explaining why that relationship is doomed to fail. I also like that Harry didn't think that she could feel about him that way.

Lovely little bit at the end. And I hope that it works out for them.

Sniff! You really can tug at the old heartstrings there, can't you. Thank you for this marvelous one shot. It really brightened my day.

i think the conversation that ron and hermione are having does not make much of a sense.and knowing harry he will not suddenly realise that he is in love with hermione(like he did in the story) apart from that..... well ....its ok i guess!

I haven't read this story yet, but I wanted to comment on your summary. I found it incredibly amusing that you say 'contains mature!Ron' like it's some kind of warning of something really bad inside.

Your stories are fabulous - so glad you haven't given up. Keep up the great work, I'm looking forward to many more.

Thanks.

Terri
[H_HrFan]

lovely story.. good one-shot though it would be lovely to see more.. anyway a great piece to tie me over til the next update to The Guardian
ramble on
dysfunctionalspirit

Awww, that was very sweet. I really liked the description of the firelight, and their kisses were entirely too sweet.

That was absolutely brilliant.
WEll done, I thoroughly enjoyed this!
Will definitely hope to see more great stuff from you.

Cheers

That was absolutely brilliant.
WEll done, I thoroughly enjoyed this!
Will definitely hope to see more great stuff from you.

Cheers

I really htink you did a wonderful job with the characters in this. I can just see Harry slightly panicking with Ron leaving in a huff and consequently completely failing to comfort Hermione unitl he's had a chance to process things. Well done!

I wasn't sure you would be able to get a sweet ending to this considering how emotionally charged it was, but the final scene with Harry and Hermoine was just so sweet and fluffy. It really was a very good story!

Aww!! That was such a swwet story I loved it!
Harry and Mione make a great couple

awwwe! very cute! i kind of didnt like it when ron left and harry got mad but now at the end i understand why that had to happen so im happy again! yay! lol very good story, its going into my favorites!

awwwe! very cute! i kind of didnt like it when ron left and harry got mad but now at the end i understand why that had to happen so im happy again! yay! lol very good story, its going into my favorites!