lol Very funny. It's just too bad Harry didn't last long. But as long as Hermione enjoyed it, I enjoyed it. And I KNOW Hermione enjoyed it.

lol...i like the ending. it seems that thats how it was ment to be, akward.

Hee! Loved it. Great first time fic! I enjoyed the read. Thanks.

Harry apparently isn't awkward like I expected him to be I like that

Cliched it might be, but good none the less. You are right, it is hard to write a unique first time H/Hr smut. That said, you wrote well. You covered all the plot points and made it very enjoyable. Good work.

OMG that was fantastic! What do you mean you don't do smut that well? Very hot and sweet at the same time.

LOL I loved the "I see paris I see France" bit. Absolutely hilarious!

Very sexy indeed.

YES! There should DEFINITELY be more smut in the world! Especially HHr smut!

Nice work palio! Boy have you come a long way with your smut, and to think just a couple of years ago you were squeamish about such scenes. Makes me proud *tear*

Very Hot! good amount a waff. One of the best first times I've read!

Very Hot! good amount a waff. One of the best first times I've read!

Very Hot! good amount a waff. One of the best first times I've read!

Very Hot! good amount a waff. One of the best first times I've read!

Very Hot! good amount a waff. One of the best first times I've read!

Very Hot! good amount a waff. One of the best first times I've read!

Very Hot! good amount a waff. One of the best first times I've read!