I feel awful for all 3 of them. Bad choices just keep growing.

It was well-written, but the R/H friendship was handled poorly, in all honesty.
I wish we could've seen some of Harry's thoughts, I doubt he liked his Hermione gonig back to his OTHER BEST FRIEND every day.

Very nice!! I liked it very much... What do you think about a little sequel?
It's just and idea, really...
Anyway, good work!!

How depressing. I'm all about H/Hr, but I really hate to see Ron get hurt. Especially when he didn't do anything wrong, really, except fall in love with Harry Potter's girl. I hope to see more of your work posted soon.

Wow, great fic. I really enjoyed it, even though the subject wasn't a happy one. I mean, I feel bad for all of them in this situation, even Ron. Nicely done.

~Cat

wow, nice simple one shot, i love this song too! great job.

awww. that's really sad. i know the song isn't a cheerful one, but maybe you could have made another chapter, an epologe (sp?) showing that at least Hermione and Harry are happy together. Maybe let Ron be ok??

But all in all, it was good, and it definately fit the song. good job.

i love the song and i love the fic. its one of the best song fics ive ever read.

As one of the first to review this, I want to start off by saying how much I love the honesty of this fic.

So I could get in the mood of the story, I
downloaded the song, and this line: "The reason that this guy is blue" is wrong. It should be, "The reason that the sky is blue." (It makes more sense with the next line, that involves the clouds moving in.) You may want to go back and fix that.

Oddly enough, my favorite part about this whole thing is how small of a character Harry is. You really did justice to the fact that Ron and Hermione had an actual marriage, and it makes me happy that you did not make it easy for her to leave him. Too many times Harry is the hero and Ron is the bad guy and Hermione's choice is easy, but the truth is that things are never that simple, and I like the confusion that is constant through this little ficlet.

I will not say it is the best I've ever read, that would be unfair, but it is definately one of the better song fics I've read, and I can appreciate it very much for what it is: a ficlet written in the heat of the moment. It is very good, and I may look at more of your work in the future. Nicely done.

wow. its been awhile for me to read something where hermione is the one in the wrong.

i did like it. it was different and its kinda cool that you came out with this in ...a day?

anyway, i liked the crying. the pain that i could really visualize in my mind. that was good.

kind of sad how they're both at fault and there isn't enough love for them to fix anything. good job!

melissa
acoustics1220

I was just listening to that song and thinking it would make a really good hhr fic! Then i logged on here and this was on the new and updated page. Very good writing, you got the emotions of the characters really well. I don't usually read a lot of songfics, but this one caught my eye because i thought of the same thing. Great writing!

aww that was sad and sweet at the same time. that was very good. keep up the good work.