very good good good good... a bit lame tho... cos seriously who would write a story like this!!

Cool story Unfaithful is one of my favourite songs, and when I saw this fic, I just went, "WHOA!"
But eh... I don't know if you did it on purpose or not, but you seem to have written, "The reason that this guy is blue". I just checked the lyrics, and it's supposed to be, "The reason that the SKY is blue"
But it was a fantastic story anyway ;D

you know - I finally heard the song like a week ago and I thought - WHOA! This is the song dumbles was talking about!

I think this fic fits that song brilliantly!

And I'm still amazed that you can pound out a fic so quickly. That's an amazing talent. That is just so awesome that you can do that. I know I can't. It takes me forever to write even a one-shot and it takes like 5 revisions for me to be satisfied...ugh - i'm jealous. But I did want to drop another review because now I can appreciate your fic a lot more just by hearing the song...
I really like that song...I've been considering buying Rihanna's CD but I need to hear more than 2 songs.

Anyway, I really like this fic and I hope to read more one shots like this (with songs included) so I can get that lightbulb experience again, Lol!

melissa
acoustics1220

I LOVE this song. It fit so well for them. Nice work. The ending was so sad.

eww, thats so sad i love that song and this story. very good! no writting mistakes! also another five points! hehe kkays im ognna read glory days in the sun now! byeeesss
ps this story is going into my favs!

Oh that must've been awful for all three of them. Their relationship, how sucky. It was a great fanfic and very sad. I really liked the song that you wrote along with it....lovely job. I'm goign to read the companion piece.

Oh my...how achingly sad...for both of them...well actually all three of them. Wonderfully written.

Ecxellent. People normally make ron into the bad guy in these kinda stories but you didn't. Very visual in parts which i like.

Ecxellent. People normally make ron into the bad guy in these kinda stories but you didn't. Very visual in parts which i like.

Ecxellent. People normally make ron into the bad guy in these kinda stories but you didn't. Very visual in parts which i like.

that was so sad and beautiful at the same time. good job. i loved it!!

WOW thats all i can say ....gezz WOW that was amazing i cant believe it it was perfect u stayed in charecter and just WO thats all i can do to describe this WOW

Yup, Ron & Hermione would never last, no matter what JKR says. They are from 2 different worlds & Hermione would end up killing him within a month! *G*

Lisa

I really, really, really like this story. You even made me download Rihanna's song because of this story, even though I didn't particularly like it when I first heard it. Now, it seems as if it's the only song I'm listening to. And whenever I listen to it, I think of this story. You truly did a fantastic job.

oh my god, that was so sad. poor, poor ron. but you know what? i could totally see this happening... if rowling actually wrote situations this mature. but hey, if her characters are growing up, then so is her audience, so there's still hope anyway, i really loved this story, so i can't wait to read a few more by you. in fact, i shall start on that... right... now!