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The Groomsmen

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queen_bunnie
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 11/06/08
So so funny. A really nice portrayal of the Marauders. I love that you included Peter in the way I'm sure he would've been, there and helping but not necessarily monopolizing the conversation shall we say. The end bit with Remus is touching and the bit with Sirius is so funny that I actually laughed out loud. Great story!
 

moony_lupin
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 25/02/07
Woot! Now that is one wedding I wish I could have attended. Jamesey getting married, with the marauders as the groomsmen, having to be good boys for a while, as they play important roles on a serious day. lol Yeah right. Not bloody likely!
Cheers, Moon
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 25/02/07
Woot! Now that is one wedding that I wish I could have attended! I love the whole grooms men thing. The idea of the Marauders having to play an important role in a wedding it downright hilarious in itself. lol.
Cheers, Moon
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 21/12/06
Hahahahahahahahaaa! that was funny!! I like it. Will you write some more chapters? That's a really good story.
 

CathyD
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 11/09/06
OMG this was GREAT! Laughed so hard while reading it, and laughed even harder when I read that last line there. I've only been reading L/J fics for about the last week, so I've not read a lot yet, but thus far this is one of my faves. Even though it's terribly short (and doesn't really have any L/J interaction), it's great to see the guys together. Great job!

~Cat
 

Yang
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 14/08/06
Oh. Lily seemed pissed. Poor Sirius. He's a dead man. *lol* I can imagine Sirius having problems with his getup. For someone who is really smart...
 

Sailor Universe
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 05/08/06
black eye? i'm almost positive that it was sirius and not james with the black eye otherwise lily probably could have set the chapel (or the great hall or wherever lily and james were getting married) on fire or made it explode and really, how does james tink that his son would get away with the nickname "willy?"
Author Feedback: lol Yeah, it was Sirius with the black eye, but even if James did have one, I'm sure once the ceremony was over, Lily would've patched him up, if only to get rid of the bruising and not the pain.

Thanks!
 

Itslily2u
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 16/07/06
Aww. I love it! Don't we all love to think of the Marauders like this, so carefree and happy and... together? Yes, yes, we do, what with knowing... what we do.

But this is nice. And happy. I it. Nice job. I like the part of getting Sirius dressed especially.
Author Feedback: Yeah, I know what you mean! *sniff* And it's hard writing Peter because he's such a rat.

I'm glad you liked the story!
 

AlbusOOTP
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 15/07/06
lol that was great! i really enjoyed it and i'm really glad you didn't make any rude comments about homosexuality,which i was afraid were coming. very funny fic.
-Albus
Author Feedback: Thank you very much! I make it a priority to never say any disparaging remarks about something like that.
 

Green Eggs and Ham
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 14/07/06
I liked it. It was funny and sweet, and I think you did a great job with it.
Author Feedback: Thank you very much!
 

AmericanMione
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 14/07/06
Aww, so cute! I love fun little Marauder moments. Remus and James having "The Talk" = I could just picturing him trying to explain everything gently and James freaking out. And then their "moment" was cute. But the best part was definitely the end, with Sirius's serenade and the last line. Only question: Sirius couldn't find some more-than-willing girl to help him get dressed (though, after probably doing the opposite )? Very cute story!
Author Feedback: Thank you very much!

As for your question a) the bridesmaids knew him and were onto him so they kept their location secret and b) he probably didn't want to lose his cool by asking for help from a girl who'd do nothing but laugh at him anyway. Er, at least that's my story and I'm so not going to stick to it.
 

Ariane
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 14/07/06
thats a really sweet, & awsome story. comical, but still emotional. LOVE IT!!
Author Feedback: Thank you very much!
 

Lady Starlight
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 14/07/06
Oh my, that was simply adorable. I loved the interactions of everyone. And Remus trying to give James the Talk, too funny.
Author Feedback: Thank you!
 

H/Hr Love
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 14/07/06
Haha this story was hilarious. It was a very well written oneshot. I see you've written a few more stories, and I'll definitely check them out.

If you have time, please read and review my story. I'm new to portkey and would love feedback from an amazing writer like yourself.

Glad to be your first review for this excellent story. :]
Author Feedback: Thank you very much! I'm glad you enjoyed the story.
 

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