hey you should wright a seqel of this story its good.

The sex was very hot! I do love that Ginny narrated it--she did a very good job. It's also very clear to me that she will never ever get what she wants and that's kind of sad. But I'm ever so happy for Hermione, who seems to love Harry for being Harry, and not for being the Boy Who Lived, as Ginny seems him. Sweet. Great Job!

nice story its nice to see ginny being ripped apart my seeing harry and hermione together, but I just wished she would have gave up on him. you could have made more than a one shot out of this, it would have been interesting

nice story its nice to see ginny being ripped apart my seeing harry and hermione together, but I just wished she would have gave up on him. you could have made more than a one shot out of this, it would have been interesting

I love the story. You should def continue it with Ginny scheming away in order to get harry.

I think you captured Ginny perfectly--all hat and no cattle. I like how you portrayed her selfish view of everything, her intrusiveness into Harry's things because that's all she can get of him, and her want to share his secrets and gosip about him in order to make herself look more important. Great contrast between her self-absorbed relationship with Harry and Hermione's protective relationship with Harry. Nicely done!


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I love this one! this is such a good fic! ginny's accidentally a bit of a voyeur in this eh? oh well, the girl got what she deserved. keep writing your stuff! You're great!

ok so im re-reading this fic b/c im a bit bored right now and i have to ask: what was the key for?!

I'm not sure if I've already comment this fic, I've read it so many times, and I still love it! Even more!

I love this delusional Ginny, believing she has all the power over Harry, and how she founds out. Harry and Hermione are adorable.

Damn! I DO LOVE THIS ONE-SHOT!
My favorite by far...

Even though I know this is perfect as a one-shot, I can't keep myself from wishing you had written more of this universe...

well... see ya!

this fic is great, its amazingly written, and the plot was very well though out and vocalized
i adore it

WOW!! THAT HAD TO BE THE BEST ONE SHOT I'VE EVER READ!! AND HOW IT WENT FROM EVERYONE ENVIYING GINNY TO GINNY ENVIYING HERMIONE WAS JUST GREAT!! 5 STARS FOR THIS ONE!!

holy crap!

*jaw drop*

best one shot I've read to date! the smut, with the angst, and the jealousy was perfect! I love it!

beautifully written as always... cheers!

hey sweetie... i wanted to get in contact with you in regards to some harry potter fan fiction awards i'm going to be hosting soon... but there isn't an email address on your profile page... please please please email me if you get this. thanks so much!!! aj - delongated@earthlink.net

Ahh, so good! I have read this fic over and over again and every time I keep finding new little things I haven't noticed before. Awesome, awesome job. Keep up the good work!!!

lil_irish_girl

omg i love this fic so much i mean there was a point sumwhere in there that i kinda felt sorry for ginny but then when i read the last line it was like woah hold it there even if u just saw them havin sex n tellin the love b/w the two she still wont let go? sigh o wells at least h/hr r together n in love even if just in secret