hannah17Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 13/08/08
Wow, this was perfect. I'm not much of a Ginny fan and I loved the way you characterized her - not to mention the fact that your Harry/Hermione scene was excellent! Woot - this is definitely going on my favorites. |
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Oooh, that was hot! It was very clever how you let us readers know that we're seeing this from Ginny's POV. I also like how Ginny kept her resolve and how she'd realized her slim chances of getting it done, by the end.
I was curious about this since I see your name and stories come up often in the PK forums, particularly in the ones I've been mod-ding. I've stopped reading chaptered fics a long time ago, but I still read one-shots from time to time.
Here's one of the threads that led me here:
http://recs.portkey.org/includes/view_rec_details.php?rec_id=2032 |
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Great story, you write really well. This is so well done that it's a story I've come back to and reread, just like Greed. Great job. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 03/03/08
There really needs to be a sequel to this...please?! Ginny is just so delusional, and Harry and Hermione need to 'come out of the closet'...or maybe we could have Hermione discover that Ginny was lurking in the closet?! |
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Ah I love you! Such great writing! Original (thank god! So hard to find now) and realistic - I just read this after Greed, not sure if you're still writing but I love your one shots, blah blah to everyone who wants u to turn them into chapter stories - I have an imagination! I'm personally glad u leave something for it.
am so glad u have lots of stories for me to read, not sure if u still write here, but hope u are somewhere, you're a great writer.
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Dizzle12Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 03/02/08
This one-shot was absolutely amazing! I've never read one from Ginny's point of view, so I thought it was soo original, and different than all the rest. I also loved the Harry/Hermione dynamics and the way you portrayed them. Too cute for words. Ah, definitely going in my favorites. |
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DravexSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 30/01/08
This is a great story! I think your plot was very bold and special!
Would you let me translate it in Chinese? Thx! |
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Twitch,
I like this story. It's entertaining, it's Harmonian (not a huge surprise of Portkey, to be honest) and caters to my smutty side, by having just enough.
I like how Ginny's so delusional she can watch Harry and Hermione going at it, and still thinks that she can land Harry? I love it! It's entertaining as hell.
Good job, thanks for sharing. |
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Cas121689Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 03/01/08
Even though this is from Ginny's perspective and more about her envy than anything, you captured this sort of playfulness between Harry and Hermione, and at the end, with his little smile, all the love. Great job! You gave us a story that really isn't about what it seems like it will be about.  |
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papermaskSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 20/10/07
i usually don't read nc17 fics, and when i do, i mostly skip over the sex scenes, but i have to say, this story is one huge exception. this was great. it's so well written with wonderful imagery, and, the fact that ginny knows harry doesn't want her is even better. are you planning on continuing this? |
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I love this story.
It's one of my favorites from the Ginny perspective.
Well done, as usual. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 14/09/07
hey you should wright a seqel of this story its good. |
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Lyndie578Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 14/09/07
The sex was very hot! I do love that Ginny narrated it--she did a very good job. It's also very clear to me that she will never ever get what she wants and that's kind of sad. But I'm ever so happy for Hermione, who seems to love Harry for being Harry, and not for being the Boy Who Lived, as Ginny seems him. Sweet. Great Job! |
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Kandy123Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 21/08/07
nice story its nice to see ginny being ripped apart my seeing harry and hermione together, but I just wished she would have gave up on him. you could have made more than a one shot out of this, it would have been interesting |
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Kandy123Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 21/08/07
nice story its nice to see ginny being ripped apart my seeing harry and hermione together, but I just wished she would have gave up on him. you could have made more than a one shot out of this, it would have been interesting |
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