AssassinUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 27/07/06
Oh my god. WOW! Talk about NC17. You better have a sequel in mind. You can't just leave us hanging. "Things have changed." AND WE WANNA KNOW HOW SO!
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Author Feedback: Thanks so much! I'm very glad you liked the fic, though I'm not planning a sequel at the moment. And yeah, this one definitely earned its NC-17 rating.
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Hm, I need to find more 'Harry turns into a girl' stories. After my recent dive into the Ranma fandom, the idea is quite intriguing... The NC17 portions of this story are interesting, though I would have preferred something a little more focused on the relationship aspect. I like it. |
Author Feedback: LOL, you are the first reviewer I've ever had who's been about cutting down on the smut! I'm glad you like the fic, in any case, and thanks so much for reading and reviewing! |
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ohh come on tell me that aint the end that you will but a better ending or justa proper ending please pretty please  |
Author Feedback: LOL, yeah, sadly, that is the end for this little tale, but the beauty of that is you can have it end however you'd like in your head (I pretty much always imagine them living happily ever after, myself ).
Thanks for reading and reviewing! |
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SOneUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 17/07/06
Thanks for this nice and awsome fic. Hopefully you will make more of these kind of stories about harry and hermione. |
Author Feedback: Thanks so much! I'm glad you liked it! |
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Awww, I love the ending. Harry's so determined to get through Hermione's stubborn streak. And it was very hot of course. Nice job, lady! |
Author Feedback: Thanks! Yeah, Harry's gotten good at dealing with Hermione's stubbornness. |
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That was brilliant! I loved it soo soo much! So original... I've never seen anything like that before! It's pure genius! And it was wonderfully well written! Absolutely brilliant! You're an amazing writer!
-Michelle |
Author Feedback: Wow, thanks so much! I think yours might be the most enthusiastic review this fic is gotten! I'm very, very glad you liked it, and thanks for reading and reviewing!  |
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JomppaSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 15/07/06
That was incredibly hot! Thanks!
I think it would have been great if Harry had transformed just after "coming", but it works this way too...
I guess I'm a bit too drunk to review, but I must say that this was a great one-shot! |
Author Feedback: Hahaha, drunken reviews are the best. Thanks for spending a good buzz on reading my fic, and I'm glad you liked it. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 14/07/06
this was such an originbal idea for a story ive never read a story where this was used. great job! |
Author Feedback: Thanks! I'm glad you liked it. |
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snoopy_pieUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 14/07/06
umm...okay well that was different. I'm not sure I liked it but it seemed to flow well and the actualy writing was good but I don't think I could ever like Hermione and "girl" Harry. It is just to weird for me LOL Also, you might want to umm finish the story. How did Harry become a girl in the first place? how did he change back? it seemed like it ended to soon. |
Author Feedback: Thanks for the review! I think this fic was definitely one of those that people either loved, hated, or were very confused about. It is a rather strange premise.
However, I think the story is complete enough in and of itself. I wanted to showcase a moment that could change Harry and Hermione's relationship forever, and the potion/spell that turned him into a girl was just a catalyst for that, not a vital part of the fic itself. I'm not a big fan of spelling every little thing out when I write; I like to leave some things up to the reader. Maybe it's because when I read fic, I like to have room to flex my imagination within the confines of the fic.
Thanks again for reading and reviewing! |
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DrakeSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 14/07/06
So effing hot I don't know what to say. Except that I demand a sequel- how can this be completed? |
Author Feedback: Hee hee hee, I'm very glad you liked! If my muse sees fit to bestow a sequel upon me, I'll speed-write it and get it up ASAP.
Thanks for reading and reviewing!  |
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a_rugratSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 14/07/06
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Author Feedback: Thanks so much! I'm very glad you liked it! I'm not planning a sequel atm, but I'm also a big proponent of "Never say never."
Thanks again for reading and reviewing. |
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HarrysgrlSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 14/07/06
that is certainly a different ending.... then again the whole story was different. in a good way. very interesting. good job. |
Author Feedback: Hahaha, yes, the consensus seems to be that it was an odd little fic. I'm glad you liked it, though, and thanks for reading and reviewing! |
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Very good story! The small dose of humour was nice too. Only thing is you sorta left us hanging at the end. Do you plan on doing sequel or a supplement? Well reguardless, you deserve a big Kudos and great job!  |
Author Feedback: Thanks! I'm not planning a sequel at the moment; my goal here was just to show a moment that changed Harry and Hermione's relationship, a turning point, of sorts, and I feel like I set out what I wanted to accomplish with that. But who knows what kind of inspiration will strike in the future.
Thanks for reading and reviewing! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 13/07/06
my goodness... perhaps the most disturbingly creative story I've read yet... i was mainly just trying to convince myself that Harry is a boy while reading the first half--imagine my relief when the Harry's "changes" disappeared! Quite lovely when it comes to the writing style, yet the plot is...interesting, to say the least. Keep up the good work, anyway; your story was very amusing. |
Author Feedback: LOL! I'll guess I'll take "disturbingly creative" as a compliment.
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Now that was a weird premise, to say the least. But I think you handled it very well. Only complaint: I wish you hadn't used the "c" word, the one that rhymes with "hunt". It seemed particularly jarring in the otherwise tastefully flowing story... I literally flinched each time I encountered the word. Hope you don't use it anymore, yikes!
Keep up the good work. |
Author Feedback: Ah, you've managed to touch on one of my pet causes, there. I'm a big fan of taking the "yikes!" factor out of the dirty C word; it really, really pisses me off that what is widely considered the most offensive and crude word in the (American, at least) English language refers to a woman's vagina. REALLY pisses me off, lol.
So I refuse to use it derogitorially (it would rock if I could spell that word), and I've started using it as a valid word for vagina. Now, for me, at least, I find it a very sexy word that works well in a sexual context, as it's considered a bit harsh and naughty, but I've changed the way I've used it enough that it's harsh and naughty in a good way, if you know what I mean.
In any case, it's the word I naturally gravitate toward now, and the word I choose to use. I don't find it distasteful, and I'm hoping someday the rest of the world won't, either!
[/idealistic feminist-ness]
In any case, thanks very much for reading and reviewing! |
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