AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 4 | Date : 06/08/07
That was great. I was wondering is there going to be more because you left a cliffhanger. |
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spaz141Signed | Chapter : 4 | Date : 09/05/07
Hee! Enjoyable! Nicely done, touch of foreshadow and a sweet romantic story. I'm glad I gave it a read. Thanks! |
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spaz141Signed | Chapter : 3 | Date : 09/05/07
Hee! Lovely! I am enjoying this read. Nothing witty to type this time...on to the next
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spaz141Signed | Chapter : 2 | Date : 09/05/07
Hee! Cute! (I'm repeating myself aren't I?) Dumb assed reviews are better than none at all right? *hugs* Lovely story...on to the next |
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spaz141Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 09/05/07
*snort* Hate cats, but please don't hold it against me. I'm perfectly fine with them hating me back, I was hoping Harry would accidentally blow him up or something...
This is starting to read dumber than I really am, so moving on... |
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crazyfishSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 27/12/06
Nice little standoff in the beginning there. I like the variation- dust bunnies. And, of course, it makes it all the more funnier that Hermione just came in and scooped up Crookshanks.
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*gasp* She's pregnant! Though I expected that since Remus asked, and then when they were on the beach and she was rubbing her stomach, then I knew for sure hehe...
I loved this! This chapter was halarious - the way Harry fell over into the water *giggles* I loved it all! Wonderful story!
*Runs off to read the sequel*
Expect more reviews, of course!
-Michelle |
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Can I just tell you that this is so reminiscent of how *I* got proposed to that I thought I was going to do cartwheels in my cubicle, laughing.
Just the part where I threw my engagement ring because I thought it was chewed gum and it bounced over the boardwalk of Atlantic city, precariously missing the cracks between the boards...
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Author Feedback:  That's hilarious! Well, after you and your now husband got over the near heart attacks I'm sure you had.
That's the nice thing about cubicles, no one would be able to see you do the cartwheel (provided you had the space).  |
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***She seemed to hesitate, so he waved harder, jumping and falling to his side to entice her to join him. It was a few minutes before he realized that she wasn't looking at all and he'd just made a spectacular fool of himself if the American kid's reactions were anything to go by.***
Is it even possible that I read this and thought, "I missed half my life NOT reading this fic."
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Author Feedback: You're preaching to the choir!  You have nooo idea how many times I wish I had like a pillow or something at work to muffle my laughter especially since my cubicle neighbor's a nazi when it comes to being loud. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 4 | Date : 07/10/06
LOVE THE ENDING SO U BETTER RIGHT SO SO SO MUCH MORE! U LEFT US AT SHOULD I SAY"A DROP OFF"!
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Author Feedback: The sequels are "Sink or Swim," "Growth Spurts," and "Idle Threats" and the prequel is "The Mattress Fortress" so I haven't left you hanging.  |
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sannihunSigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 24/09/06
Hey, I'm swedish!! That was fun! Loving the series this far!  |
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Aww, cute proposal. See, Harry, this is why you don't try to be artsy with the proposal: You end up swimming in your formal clothes in a bay. Didn't he learn anything at that fancy school of his? Harry and Hermione's banter is absolutely adorable. And then her "little" pronouncement at the end...can't say I didn't see it coming, but it was a nice cliffhanger all the same. A lovely story. Glad I have more to read over at "Sink or Swim"! |
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Haha, Harry Potter's one track mind: It's a dirty place. Lovely, again. Poor them, scaring off all of those tanned Fijians (Fijians? ...People of Fiji?) with their paleness. I don't think Harry's going to give Hermione much opportunity to be out in the sun either. They'll probably spend a lot of time in the room, if you know what I mean (So Harry can help Hermione cook, I mean. *wink*). Fun! |
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Haha, someone's starting their vacation early. Harry's freak was cute and the euphemism discussion was funny. And very true. It's just like being able to make [almost] anything dirty. Aww's go out to the last line. Why does it not surprise me that any child of Tonks's is a handful. I almost feel bad for Crookshanks. But I want to see about this vacation. |
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