oh my gosh...
its great..but its sad that hermione and harry have to loose their baby...
oh well, that's life...
at least it strengthen their relationship, right? 
a very beautiful fic... |
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I'm sorry to say... it didn't bomb  I loved it, it's AMAZING, sucks to lose a baby, my cousin was suppose to give birth to twins but one of them ended up being a disappearing child... she hasn't had the other one yet, but I think it's going to be soon.
keep it up
you're a WONDERFUL author
I loved it
-megz- |
Author Feedback: Haha, thanks, I'm glad you liked it. I don't think I know anyone that has really lost a baby. It sucks about you cousin, she must have been really depressed about it. I hope she didn't have any problems with the other one!
Thanks, I try my best!
*~Archie~* |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 29/08/06
wow that was breathtaking amazing  it was such a great story. |
Author Feedback: Thanks! It was a lot of fun to write. Once I started it, I was just so taken with the idea, haha. It's a great song. But hey, thanks for the review!!!
*~Archie~* |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 24/07/06
aaawwwww ...... such drama. lol! tell and tell and tell the truth nothing but the truth the truth!  |
Author Feedback: Haha, I can see it now:
Harry: I want the TRUTH!
Hermione: YOU CAN'T HANDLE THE TRUTH!
Haha, I thought that was kinda funny.
The truth shall set you free!
Sorry, it's late so I'm in a funny mood. Thanks for the review!
*~Archie~* |
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Pretty heartbreaking story but real good. I really love your writing style. |
Author Feedback: It was sad, but I seem to do best in that department for some reason, lol. I've got a new story I'm going to write, just a 2 shot, but's it's kinda fluffy or whatever, more "cutesie." A bit different than my usual gloomy style, but still me, lol. Though I have written a few others that aren't so sad! Yay for me! Thanks for the comment!
*~Archie~* |
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lzodSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 18/07/06
Sniffle....that was just brilliant. Sigh, poor Harry, thinking Hermione just didn't love him & found someone better than him & her losing the baby...at least something good came out of it.
Lisa |
Author Feedback: Hi Lisa. Yeah, it's sad, but that seems to be my style I guess, lol. Good thing they got together though, atleast it wasn't ALL bad, haha. Thanks for the review!
*~Archie~* |
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Awesome story. I really felt like i was there seeing it. I like how you got them back together through talking and cuddling. I really feel bad for the baby though, I mean Hermione could of have been a great mother. And we all know Harry is going to be a great father. Probably spoil the kid. I hope you update ur other story soon Potter vs. Granger rivalry. Good Luck. Keep Writing.  |
Author Feedback: Thanks, I'm glad you liked it. I try to use a lot of detail so people can actually "see" what's going on, though in this one, I didn't use much because I just wanted it to be something quick. Of course I had to bring them back together! It's Harry and Hermione! It's sad for the baby, they would have made lovely parents. I updated The Potter Vs. Granger Rivalry just last week (I think), so I hope you enjoy that! Thanks for the review! I'll keep writing, don't worry!
*~Archie~* |
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im so glad to u told me the ending bfore it even came out... not! gr, i knew it was gonna happen so i wasnt so surprised... and im just glad those two stayed together, kinda, lol... Yo man im tired and need some sleep ima ttyl homie b.. keep up da good work yo |
Author Feedback: Hey homie, what's up? Haven't talked to you in a few days. Haha, sorry I spoiled it for you, you'll thank me one day...maybe? Dunno, it just sounded good I guess. Haha, I need to go to sleep to.....soooo tired...haha. Yeah, I'll talk at ya later girl. Thanks for the review! You're just "fat" like that....did I use that right? Lol?
*~Archie~* |
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tubsSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 13/07/06
This was a great story. And to think that all it takes is one song to do this. I really enjoyed this story and hope that you continue writing (because we cant leave all these storyies half sone can we).
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Author Feedback: Hey Tubs! The song, I dunno, once I actually listened to the words, I thought up this story immediately. It was weird. Music can be such a huge inspiration! The best one there is, other than actual experiences I suppose. Of course I'll keep writing, I never plan on stopping! I need all the practice I can get! I have every intention to finish all my stories, don't worry! Thanks for the feedback!
*~Archie~* |
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Really good. It was so sad and beautiful...
I loved the way you *showed* Harry and his feelings and everything.
Great fic! 
*~*Gisele*~*
PS: I hope you had received my e-mail with the new chapter. |
Author Feedback: Hey Gisele! I know I'm taking a while with the next chapter of your story, I'm sorry, I've been pretty busy. I'm not alert enough to do it now, I'd most likely just rush through it, lol, so I'm going to try to take a crack at it tomorrow! I don't think I have anything going on then.
I think the best way to deliver the story and get the impact I was hoping for is having Harry's point of view. Not to mention, it worked well with the song. I tried to make it decent! Thanks for the review! Like I said, I hope to have your chapter done tomorrow!
*~Archie~* |
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CodSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 12/07/06
Very touching! It's very well written I cried during some parts. Harry's right, Hermione would never do that but you made it very convincing that I almost believed Hermione actually cheated! Well that and I had no idea what she was keeping from Harry.
Great job.
Cod |
Author Feedback: Hey Cod! Thanks, it's not my best, but it was just a quick idea thing. Yeah, Hermione would never cheat on him, but because it was from Harry's point of view, it had to seem like it. I didn't really hint much about the pregnancy (once again because it was Harry's point of view), I wanted it to be a surprise, just like it is in the song! Thanks a lot for the comment!
*~Archie~* |
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alayneniSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 12/07/06
Good. I like it. I hope the Potter Vs. Granger Rivalry and Never Interview Mr. POtter get updated soon! |
Author Feedback: Thanks, I'm glad you liked it. I just updated The Potter Vs. Granger Rivalry, I hope you enjoyed it. I hope to update Take It From Me, NEVER Interview Mr. Potter soon, I'm just completely clueless on that story! I'm sorry! But thanks for the review!
*~Archie~* |
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That was good. All except for the idea that someone "squashed" their baby. At 10 weeks, there would be no squashing. The baby is hardly the size of a small bean. The trauma might have caused her to miscarry, but there would be no squashing. Most especially, someone that worked in a hospital wouldn't say that Hermione squashed her baby, even in passing.
I'm sorry, but I particularly grossed out by this description. I did like the story. I really did. It's just that one part... |
Author Feedback: I'm sorry! I'm not very aware of pregnancy things, lol. I had to ask my dad's girlfriend about a lot of it, just because I haven't got a clue. I didn't really think about it. I just tried to think of a way how falling can cause a miscarry, and that was the best I could come up with. I apologize again. I suppose it is a bit of a gross thought.
But thanks for the comment, and for setting me straight on that. I won't make the mistake again! Thanks!
*~Archie~* |
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VicklesSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 12/07/06
It's very good for what it is: a songfic that couldn't get out of your head and needed to get on the page. I'm currently working on a story that has similar parts as this one, and it was interesting to see your take on it. Well done. |
Author Feedback: Yeah, I got the cd and just couldn't stop the idea! I love writing songfics like this, I dunno why. Music just gives me loads of inspiration. You're working on story kinda like this? I'll be looking forward to seeing it, just to see your take. Thanks for the reivew!
*~Archie~* |
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I thought that this fic was amazing. It was well written and I felt as though I was right there with both Harry and Hermione experiencing all the emotions that they were feeling. The thought of someone losing their soul mate or their child is heartbreaking; however, I'm glad that Harry and Hermione were able to get back together and work through the issues that they eventually had to face. Great fic; I hope to read more of your work.
~Danie~ |
Author Feedback: Hey, thanks, I'm glad you liked it! I tried my best with it. I hope I put in enough detail! I try to make it kinda like a movie, so you can almost picture what's going on. Anyway, yeah, it's pretty heartbreaking, but Hermione and Harry needed to get back together to get over it. They needed each other. Simple as that. I hope you like my other work and thanks a lot for the review!
*~Archie~*
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