AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 26/10/06
Me again!
I actually read "Non Sequitur" last night, but was too tired to type anything remotely rational or typographically legible!  But I will get back to it soon!
Now, THIS story - so far, really enjoying it. I really like the way I, as a reader, feel almost immediately as though I've just dropped into a Pensieve memory and it's all there complete - you create a lovely, easy atmosphere, especially with your character interactions and emotions.
Anyways, off to the next chapter before I lose the thread!
Cheers!
Janie
PS I've received your review replies: You're welcome!  Thank heavens your stories are easy to review! There are some stories I've read - very few, luckily - that I just can't seem to find any words for (which is pretty unusual for me!  ) |
Author Feedback: Hey Janie
Thank you so much for your kind words, this fic was the first time I'd tried any extended Trio interaction, so I'm really glad you think it's turned out well so far, and that you enjoyed the feel of it so far.
Cheers for reviewing all my fic so far  I'll return the favour, trust me  |
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that was actually a pretty mean thing to do to Ron. I can't believe that Harry and Hermione would do that to him. What did Luna have to say about it?
I really liked the whole story, except for the ending. Ron got them together - you'd think that they would be happy for that since they had been dancing around their emotions for so long. and, yeah, i know that he read her diary, but he only read that little bit and he helped her after all. i don't know, it seems a little harsh. and i like Ron.
oh well, it's your story and you can do whatever you want. i really did like it over all and i think i'll check out a few of your other stories. good job - it was fun! |
Author Feedback: Hmm, wait a second, you were saying Hermione should have clocked him a minute ago
All's fair in love and war, my dear, and technically they get together *despite* Ron
I like Ron as well, don't get me wrong. I just enjoy evuhling it up  Glad you liked the story anyway, thanks for all your reviews  |
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i love the humor - the fifth year clapping and getting hit on the head by Madam Rosemerta. classic.
everyone else was expecting it! i think you did a great job showing that - a better job that JKR, that's for sure. if everyone else in her book sees that they are good together, why can't she?
it was really sweet! i am really anxious to see how they react to Ron. i hope they see him with Luna and everything falls into place.
are they still taking classes? and searching for the horcruxes? isn't that quite a lot? |
Author Feedback: I didn't really think too much on the mechanics to be honest, it's only a 10,000 word piece  I'm pleased you liked the getting-together scene though, and the jokes
And yes, they'll react to Ron in a...particular way. |
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i can't believe that Ron did that to Hermione. I'm surprised that she didn't clock him right there. It just wasn't nice at all. Probably one of the reasons she hasn't said anything to Harry is her concern for Ron's feelings. and now he just went and confused her even more.
i hope that Voldemort doesn't strike when they are on their way there. that would be sad.
I'll be surprised if Harry or Hermione doesn't mention their blind date to the other and figure it all out first. that would be funny if they got back at Ron. |
Author Feedback: It was one of his famed "insensitive wart" moments, indeed. And I wouldn't worry about Voldemort, he has no part in this story.
Your suspicions may be accurate |
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I love Ron in this story. But, when did he get so mature? I'd have loved to see the transformation. well, i like good - part of the trio - Ron.
I can't wait until Hermione goes beet red when she finds out she dropped her diary. And, I can't believe that Ron read it either...although it is Ron and that fits his character really well. i am really thankful that he is cool with that. I'm a little scared by his plan, though...i mean, the fact that he's planning something.
i'm so excited to read more! |
Author Feedback: Yeah, you do have to worry if someone so preternaturally dense as to mess with Hermione starts formulating plans, don't you?
Hehe, as for Ron's maturity...I wouldn't judge a book by its cover *just* yet
Glad you enjoyed it anyway, read on  |
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davekSigned | Chapter : 4 | Date : 01/10/06
hahaha very good Ron got what he had coming pity we did not see his side of the last part of the sory he will be rememberd by this for years |
Author Feedback: Thanks, glad you liked it  |
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ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha!! That was so funny! |
Author Feedback: Glad you liked it  Read on, my son  |
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I LOVED IT ... LOVE LOVE LOVED IT !!!! GREAT JOB AT THE END !!!! that was really funny when you made Ron cupid !!! ... LOL !!! its really too bad that the stories over  im really sad .... but i think ill get bye ... GREAT STORY !!!!
Well ...
TTFN,
-Harryluver05 |
Author Feedback: Hah, thanks dude.
Glad you enjoyed it so much, cheers for the review. |
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sartoneSigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 26/09/06
I love how this reads, pure fun! Ron is so well portrayed!! Hermione is neurotic...but that's why I love her. |
Author Feedback: She's not so much neurotic really, just stressed out. If your best friend and your family was going to die a slow, langorous death at the hands of a madman, you'd be too
Glad you enjoyed it, cheers for the review. |
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kelliannUnsigned | Chapter : 4 | Date : 25/09/06
That was great! Ron definately messed with the wrong couple. I actually laughed out loud. Great job! Loved it!!! |
Author Feedback: Thanks, glad you enjoyed it  |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 4 | Date : 25/09/06
poor Ron! and he did soo much! I love his character in this fic. Thank you |
Author Feedback: I quite liked him as well, but then, I'm a Ron fan  Thank you for reviewing. |
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jajajaja ron flying on a cupid coustime lol loved to see that i hope rupert grin dont mind it would be rediculiy funny, loved the hole idea of the couch next to the fire ohhh so cousy jajajaja and were did you get the idea of harry´s porn voice lol that was funny thought it was on the second chapter 9ohh and must say that idint thought that you would make another chapter but that was great! thanks |
Author Feedback: Yeah, had to finish it off. It just took me a fairly circuitous route to get there.
And Harry's porn voice, much like the vast majority of this story, was just a flash from my mostly lazy and badly paid muse.
Glad you enjoyed it, thanks for your reviews  |
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That's hilarous i mean ron being cupid. I think Hermione was wicked in this story. I think overall this story is great. I mean usually its Ron thats last to figure out that Hermione and Harry are meant to be. But i think what he did, which was reading Hermione's diary was just plain rude. I mean has he ever heard of privacy. Let's just hope he learned his lesson this time. I think the way that everyone lost their bets was a good extra. keep writing. |
Author Feedback: Ron's brain often doesn't engage before he does something, it's a running theme  Glad you liked it, thanks for reviewing. |
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kbluesmomSigned | Chapter : 4 | Date : 25/09/06
Absolutely, profoundly perfectly cute! I loved it. More specifically I loved the whole dynamic of the matchmaker'thing. This was well written and thought out. Rather original too. GO HMS Pumpkin Pie!!! |
Author Feedback: Sheeeeee's a grand old ship, a grand old tuuug....
...I'll stop singing and get my coat. Thanks for reviewing  |
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Author Feedback: Thanks, man  Glad you enjoyed it. |
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