great joke at the end and I love this chapter. please update soon I would love to know what happens next.

I just caught up and I really like where this is heading...

I hope that you'll write more soon!

I like this story... it is just fluufy and sweet enough to leave me with a smile... i cant wait to read more

Interesting, I like it so far and I can't wait for more so please update again real soon!

sweet so so so sweeeeeeeettttt i bet dan is like this in real life LOL!

Wonderful fluff , perhaps the progression was a little too predictable or a little too easy. It's your story - you tell it the way you want.

Great job on this chapter, I have to admit that I was not too keen on the opening story line with Harry and Hermione having the track record that they did, but it is comming together nicely now and I find myself looking forward to the next chapter so please update soon.

aaawww awww awwww ouchhhh my toofers hurt too much this is way toooooo sweeetttt help!!!!!

I am so caught up in this story. Keep it going.

that was a very sweet chapter. I love this little story. I also enjoy the fast updates.

That was a cute little chapter. I just love the Creevy influence. Keep up the good work.

Keep up the great work! I absolutely think its great and adorable, and anyother synonym you can think of, can't wait for the enxt chapter...bye!

great chapter I can not wait till you update. So please update soon I would like to know what happens next/

this is good


very good!

This Hermione is so funny, very blunt. Good stuff! I can't wait for the next update.

melissa
acoustics1220

wow- this one was cool. You know why? Chapter 4 is cool because we got to relive a lot of the last battle. Poor Ron, I wonder why he really slipped into insanity...I mean, really - did he hold on so long because he was trying to hold out for hermione and then realized she didn't love him like that?

Or was it all just too much?



This was a great chapter. I liked that girl too. Especially being so protective of Hermione. Thank goodness. Though I think the Weasleys would probably do something to Harry if they heard anything was amiss from Hermione.

who was that girl...Marlie! Marlie - I like Marlie.

But then Hermione wouldn't willingly spill her guts unless she was tricked, unless she was tricked - which Gred and Forge are quite capable of doing so...yeah.

cool!

Can't wait for the next part!

melissa
acoustics1220