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h and hr lover
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 20/01/07
i loved it my e-mail addy is boughtsybaby@hotmail.com and i love ya story and i cant wait til ya fin it.
 

paxaurelia
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 07/12/06
that's an interesting perspective. it's not exactly how i imagined Hermione leaving the Burrow. i'm surprised that Ginny didn't act obviously like that towards Hermione more in the story. perhaps because Harry was around?

Hmm...I wonder if what Hermione said to Ginny about how she really didn't know him really hit home. It seemed like it shut her up anyway...more or less.

perhaps you should attach that to the beginning of the story. i wish i had read that at the beginning. just a thought. thanks for writing, it was fun.
 

dysfunctionalspirit
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 16/11/06
wonderful wonderful!! reading of the one-shots of yours today that i have is making me want to read you 'Circle" fic..I'll get to it... well great job on this fic..
ramble on
dysfunctionalspirit
 

Faoron
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 07/09/06
Reading this after having read the main story... the interaction between Ron and Luna is so sad, knowing their fate. *sniff* Powerful story, very emotionally moving.
Author Feedback: Thanks
 

dilligas76
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 14/07/06
Great - I always look forward to new stories/chappies from you! keep up the good work and keep posting
dilligas
 

Mary6707
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 12/07/06
Nice chapter. I can't wait till she gets to Harry. I am curious as to where you will take this!
 

sparky40sw
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 11/07/06
all sorts of interesting openings there - loved the spat with Ginny - while there are some good H/G stories she is easy to see going the other way also.. Loved Hr/R scene also - that is the canon Ron all the way.

Thanks for the tantalizer.
warm regards
Author Feedback: Honestly, have yet to see one, but YMMV...

Yeah, Hermione/Ron are pretty much that way, aren't they.
 

harryloveshermine28
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 11/07/06
Cool as story. I'm likeing it so far. Cant wait for your next up date. Hope you get Harry and Hermione together soon. ( Ha, Ha, Ha ) Thank you for your time.
Author Feedback: um....sure
 

Muirnin
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 11/07/06
Hey ya Mike,

Well I figured since I was re-reading Harry Potter and the Circle's End (again ) I saw this pop up and went Oh what the hell, I'm not doing anything but procrastinating with my own writing and catching up on my reading ... my procrastination is also getting in the way of my housework as well!

Perhaps I can do it all ... I am Super Muirnin afterall! Mother of two by day, Fan Fiction writer by night who lives vicariously on the edge of all she reads and writes ... ah what a wonderful thing the mind is ... an Imaginative mind is a terrible thing to waste!

Take care ... I'm going back to Harry Potter and the Circle's End

As Always,
Muirnin - who ships what is RIGHT not what is easy
Author Feedback: Yeah, my housework suffers too...
 

lzod
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 11/07/06
Oh that was good. I love bitter Ginny...*EG* you just love hating her! & how long of a tide are we talking here? a day? two day's? *G*

Lisa
Author Feedback: I don't hate ginny, I dunno, I am actually working on a later bit right now instead of the next chapter, because I need to get that done...
 

Caliburst
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 11/07/06
A nice little vignette. I didn't know Hermione and Ginny were so at odds. Obviously, there were bad feelings between them because Hermione started going out with Harry, but I didn't know there was that much animosity. If Ginny had no problem in using a love potion on Harry, why didn't she try something on Hermione? MAybe Hermione's to smart for all that, and she isn't as distracted as Harry is.

Of course, I loved your Ron/Luna moment. When "Circle" is over, you can write a full fic just parallelling "Circle" on the Ron/Luna relationship-- increasing the breadth of their story as you've done in your othe vignettes.

You rock, you rule. End of story (and feedback!)
 

destroyerdrt
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 11/07/06
Thank you for this story and the time and effort that you have put in to it.Please ignore any and all flames.Enjoy your self when you write and have fun in your life when you can.
 

happylady
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 11/07/06
As for somthing to tide us over I like it very much. Hermione should have punched Ginny
in her perfect face anyway post more soon
unil next time
Gloria
Author Feedback: Well we had to wait until chapter 19-20 in circle...
 

DJ32
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 11/07/06
As always nice work. Thanks for the hold over "snack." Can not wate for Ch 49 & more do you thik you will do a Sequel to Circle?
Author Feedback: Hmm...no comment....
 

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