This story was very lifelike. I can definitely seeing this scenario played out, but I hope Jo doesn't do anything like this. You described all the feelings of the survivors of a close tragedy so well. Thank you for sharing your skills with us.

I'm sorry about that review that I left. You just touched a very personal place in my heart. Needless to say, I won't be reading anymore of those saad stories.

Lori

by the way my baby's name is Elisabeth too

I can so utterly and completely feel her loss, loneliness, emptiness.... I'm still crying because I KNOW.... the only reason I'm still here is because I have the children that our love made. It's still so very hard though.

that was SOOOOO sad!!! i am still crying! you are very good at angst and you should do more of it. you should definately write more! i really loved this story it was SO sad! and i also think harry would have reacted the same way hermione did.

Ok...now that was just depressing. Sniffle...& a tissue warning should be up there. *G* Also, a warning not to read this while at work. *G* Very touching & moving. & why should any of them see her pain, they only are concerned with their own, not hers.

Lisa

Wonderful fic hun. Filled with so much emotion, that it brought a tear to my eye. Very nicely done, you are a very talented writer. You handled this situation very well, for it being such a "touchy subject". I look forward to reading more of your work in the future. Great job!

~Cat

how utterly depressing; good fic. write more, but maybe not this dark...

Wow, that was so tragic and I can't blame her for one minute. Noone can go through that alone and survive without their soulmate. I know because I'm happily married to mine.

That was a beautiful story. Hermione's thoughts were well written and believable. Thanks.

WoW! this is such a sad story!, i cant imagine how Hermione would feel... its just sooo brillent! i just cant stop crying..

Plz write more... 10 out of 10!!!

What a dark, but sad story. It was beautiful written and I love the song that was added in. It was so sad. I found myself tearing up. You are an amazing writer and have nothing to be nervous about. Hopefully you'll write many more fanfictions.

If you have time, please read and review my story. I'd love feedback from an amazing author like yourself.

Keep writing. :]

i was crying before i even got to a huge major part....i really like tha yiu put in the loss of their baby..itreally helped make it even more of a tragedy///

Wow, that was utterly depressing. Lovely job. It was very...depressing and very deep. I liked the progression from how Hermione thought of how suicide was bad and how it went to being good. Mind you, I could describe that better, but I don't feel like doign that. Anyways...it was a great chapter. I am glad you put warnings up, because it might be offensive to some people who knew others who killed themselves.

For a first fic, that was absolutely phenominal. As you read this story you can truly feel the raw emotions Hermione is experiencing. Losing Harry was soul shattering enough, but to lose their child, the last remaining conection she would ever have with her soul mate, would cause such intense pain that she could not bare it the rest of her life. True, this was an exceptionally sad, heart breaking story, but, it was so beautifully, expertly written. I really enjoyed the story, I'm sorry she did what she did, but I undestand why she felt she had to. You have a beautiful talent and I look forward to seeing more examples of your work.

wow....that was sad but....absolutely beautiful
I could actually feel what hermione was going through...and I felt bad for her...Anyways, that was some fabulous work, and I hope you keep writing. Great Work.