liamtohaSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 15/01/08
this was heartwrenching, it made me tense, but i loved it. |
Author Feedback: Thank you very much! It's always great to share writing that can be heartwrenching, emotion is always good. |
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 this is so .... tragic . it's suppose to be harry and Hermione.. just harry and Hermione.. not some husband to get in the way.. but this is so close to how life is sometimes it's scary . . at least for me.. great job.. i feel for ya Harry.
ramble on
dysfunctionalspirit |
Author Feedback: Thank you, that was sort of what I was aiming for, I'm glad you realized it.
Thank you for the read and reviews! |
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Jade EyesSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 09/11/07
why did you have to end it that way??? Yes, what a waste! and the way you wrote it, seems like there's no way they'll be together, not here in this life but in after life! yeah, what a waste |
Author Feedback: Ahh, I suppose that's exactly what I was going for, right?
Thank you for the read and review! |
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Glassesfreak, I re read the fic and it was great...again! But I really write this because I just realized that we have met on three different sites. We have known each other for over two years. We've talked and reviewed stories. Missed each other in our absences and yet we don't even know each others real names! I just thought that was odd...well anyway good story again! |
Author Feedback: Only two years? Heh, it does seem like much longer.
For now, I think you (and only you) can refer to me as Nat. |
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mg2090Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 02/07/07
hi im back!
i read about a sequel in th reviews and i was wondering where it was cuz i couldnt find it on portkey, hpfanfiction or mugglenet.
could u please send me the link?
thanx
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Author Feedback: Ah yes, the sequel. I do believe it was called It Only Happens Once. Due to multiple reasons, most importantly a personal one, I decided to take it off portkey (the only site it was on) and since then have not regretted it.
However, I do still have it saved on my computer and would gladly send it to you if you still wish to read it. Please email me at nat-wong@hotmail.com and I will send the final draft to you ASAP. |
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mg2090Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 02/07/07
that was a really really nice story. usually angst fics involve someone dying and they are only appealing if well written. thats why this is a nice change especially since it so well written!
i read ur other version tho i hav 2 admit i didnt like it as much as this one-partly cuz im a true h/hr shipper nd partly cuz i felt that the ending was rushed. this 1 however is close 2 perfection.
i c that u like 2 write angst fics. im the same and id love it if u read my two one-shots(unfortunately--they involve people dying!)
KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK(nd i dont know if i can wait much longer fr the edge of the bed 2 end!)
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Author Feedback: Ah I see. Well, there's no shame in admitting that, sometimes it's tough to imagine HHr with anyone but the other. I still stand by my opinion and like the other version much much more.
I'm very glad you enjoyed this fic and I will definetely check out your two angst fics when I have the time. I'm currently very busy and working on The Edge of the Bed and I usually do prefer to leave constructive criticism in reviews.
Thank you for the read and review! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 25/06/07
are you having an affair??? you have some very ominous AN and angsty stories... |
Author Feedback: Um, no, I'm not having an affair. I'm not even married...and I don't even have a boyfriend.
But I'll take this review as a compliment, as negative as it may seem. I do realize my stories are ominous and angsty and...negative, really.
But they're what I write. If you need more information, please refer to my author bio.
Thank you for the read and review. |
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Oh gosh, that was so sad, but so beautiful!
Why didn't Harry tell her right away that he loved her? Why did he wait until after she was married and had children? Stupid, stupid Harry!
You've captured their emotions so well, and you've written this so fantastically! (I've actually cried a bit)
I could feel Hermione's frustration, as well... this story is just brilliant!
I read the original, as well (got a link from a review reply you sent somebody else), and I love it just as much, but in a different way. I can picture it happening both ways.
You are really a fantastic writer!
I look forward to reading more of your stories!
-Michelle |
Author Feedback: Thank you very much! I'm very glad you read both versions and like both. Thank you very very much for the kind words, read and reviews. |
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That was great. I feel bad for Hermione; in love with Harry but committed to another man. Well, at least they both know how they feel, I guess that can be some form of compensation for them.
Glad to see harry can smile even without technically having Hermione as his. Keep it up, Ash. |
Author Feedback: Wow, so I guess you liked this one, too? Alright, that's two for two! Heheh, I'm glad you liked this one as well. It seems like all my fics are very different and I'm glad you like this one, too. Thank you for the review! |
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I know it's a bit late to review... but anyway 
oh my... this story always gets me. I always come back to it. I guess I've read it 10 times allready. It's just so sad.... but in a good way. Love it!
-mitch |
Author Feedback: No, no, it's not late at all. You don't have to read something the second it comes out. I'm glad you liked this story and have returned to it many times. Strange how sad things are the best of all.
Thank you for the review! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 11/08/06
“I love her so much. I just want to love her. Why can’t I love her, Hermione? How come I’m not allowed?” he asked, feeling more and more depressed. She pushed his bangs away from his face, getting a better look at his sad eyes.
Wow.
See, I had such a long review...picked out my favorite parts and everything. Mentioned how funny it was, in a good way. Mentioned how Hermione slapped him twice, and wondered why she was so angry. And then, it all clicked together. This was beautiful. From beginning to end. In my top two favorite fics ever. I loved it. Nothing has ever made me become quiet, and not stop reading, reading very slowly, etc etc. It made me cry and everything.
“Do you hear me?,” she whispered, “You have me, body and soul. You’re the one, Harry. You always have been.” She kissed his nose and then his lips.
Beautiful. |
Author Feedback: I'm so glad that you really really love this fic. I'm quite indifferent when it comes to it. At first, I like how it ends HHr but I still like the original version much more. But thank you so so much for this and I...think...I'm sorry I made you cry.
Thank you again for the review!
EDIT: Here's the original version if you're interested. http://fanfiction.mugglenet.com/viewstory.php?sid=24013 |
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yep as i said in the review It Only Happens Once--ive read 3,000,000,001 times on hp fanfiction! |
Author Feedback: Heheh, wow. So I guess you really know the difference down to the last period. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! |
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ooooo hooooo, nice! who exactly is Hermione married 2? its not Neville, dont think is Ron (they were out drinking so Ron would know Harry loves Hermione) maybe il find out in the sequel.
I really like ur style of writing |
Author Feedback: Well, I wish I could say what I used to say but I can't anymore because I know who she married. I'm glad you like this story enough to want to read the sequel. Thanks for the compliment and review! |
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This was beautiful and sad. I liked the bits when Hermoine is caling Ginny. Quite funny, that moment is. Then for the dramatic moment and I must say, your story has struck me like no other. It brought up a past and a very similar experience that I had made myself forget. Very well done. I applaud you style. Your ideas. Your use of dialogue. Your ability to hold your readers captive with the emotion and the words that spill off the page (well..screen.., but page sounds better). Very nice. I look forward to reading more of your work. |
Author Feedback: Wow, Beth Brown read and reviewed one of my fics. I feel so..... and  and  Funny how your mind plays tricks on you. Anyways, wow, thank you very much. This means a lot to me even though it shouldn't and I should continue to write no matter what people say but I think that applies to flames and this one doesn't seem like a flame and I'm pretty sure you're not a flamer otherwise I'd feel insulted and hate you...but I don't hate you so I think I'm reacting positively to something I should react positively to so it's all good. And wow, JKR, check out THAT run on sentence. Haha, okay, sorry, I'm a bit of a grammar freak. Wow, how badly have I messed up THIS author reply? Look how long this is. Actually, I've seen longer but that's not the point. The point is this is a reply and not a rant. So actually getting to the replying; Thank you very much for the compliments. I do hope you'll stick around for many more fics and actually, I hope I will stick around for many more fics. *stopping reply right now* Thanks for the review! |
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dontcare89Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 25/07/06
i just realized that this was the first part to the "it only happens once" story....haha ok, makes much more sense!!! awwww why did harry wait?!! he should have stopped her! now poor sam gets stuck with the children, lol, oh well atleast they're together!! its a really good story line!!! good writing! |
Author Feedback: Haha, dodged a bullet there, eh? I was very torn about the kids and hit myself for digging a grave there. Let's just say Hermione gets them on weekends. Yes, at least they're together. The sequel is much much more about true love and not letting it pass you by. |
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