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The Girl in the Cafe

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Jade Eyes
Signed | Chapter : 5 | Date : 01/10/09
wow! how i missed this fic is beyond me! this is so amazing and sweet.. slow and loving it every second of it hehehe.. thanks for sharing :-)
 

spotter
Signed | Chapter : 5 | Date : 10/08/09
Fantastic bit of story writing, I hope you continue to update this bit of fiction as I want to see where it leads
The Spotter
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 5 | Date : 29/06/09
wow, no matter how many times i go back to this story and reread when none of my new fanfics get updated it still keeps me busy and hooked. i love the aspect that they don't know eachother, and hermione is all muggle. any chance that there might be a sequel? i keep thinking about one, and i'd be really happy to see one, and i know other people. peace!
 

unomesowell
Unsigned | Chapter : 5 | Date : 03/03/09
I have never managed to finish an entire Harry/Hermione story before (Ron shipper here) but this was quite lovely and well written. I think you should be very proud of this piece.
 

biogrrl
Signed | Chapter : 5 | Date : 17/01/09
saw this rec'd on crack_broom - i really loved it! thanks for sharing it with us!
 

Tigerlily
Unsigned | Chapter : 5 | Date : 23/07/08
sweet. really sweet. I like the shy Harry. and the plot.
 

Alana
Signed | Chapter : 5 | Date : 03/07/08
oh no, I nearly cried when you ended this fic. This was pure magic wrapped up in a coffee roll and pure delicious love mixed in with a drink.
I know totally corny. But I felt touched when I read your story.
It was utterly cute on many levels. And, Ron was an amazing best friend. I've never ever read a fic that had this level of Harry & other people interaction that seemed realistic.

Even your "other" characters were amazingly fleshed out! Thank you for this insight into AU world. Please continue writing great fics like this? Please?
 

cincoquatro
Signed | Chapter : 5 | Date : 27/05/08
This was such a fantastic read. I kind of wish it had a few more chapters! Thanks again!
 

cosmopolitan411
Signed | Chapter : 5 | Date : 27/04/08
wow, this was just such an amazing and cute little piece. really, kudos on it!

(going on favs asap! lol)
 

ladylaughalot
Signed | Chapter : 5 | Date : 26/04/08
sorry for pointless review just want this back on my favourites list.
Author Feedback: nope. Not pointless at all. Your interest got the creative juices flowing again, and it's been a while since I've written any harry potter fanfiction. So thanks, man.
 

Gabi
Unsigned | Chapter : 5 | Date : 31/01/08
This must be the 100th time I read this fic, and still, I can't stop smiling once I finish reading. I'm not sure if I have already left a review, but I have to say that you are really talented, and this is one of my favorites!
It's amazing how you can write such an amazing H/Hr story with so little direct contact with the two of them.
You trully ARE talented!


 

runningidiot
Signed | Chapter : 5 | Date : 13/12/07
Holy **** on a sandwich with **** on top!
Yeah, after reading conversations on idle things, I decided to look up your other stuff.
I have deduced, after reading only two stories by you, that you are a fantastic writer XD.
And you're Canadian too! Which makes it that much cooler.
But yeah, this story ... like ... isn't it what we all dream of? That chick that you see in passing that you think is kind of cute.... But, after that fleeting moment, you will never see her again =/
That's the whole point of stories though, to take reality and make it unbelievable.
Great job! Now, to your other stories!
 

chelley83
Signed | Chapter : 5 | Date : 02/12/07
ok i don't like how the ending is because it leaves it so open but other than that i think it's really good...i do get what you were trying to convey with the story and i really did like it...i'm just one of those that likes the closure on things...anyways thanks for writing this
 

SilverFoot
Signed | Chapter : 5 | Date : 04/11/07
I was actually wondering what kind of end you would have in store for me, a rushed one, a short one or a non detailed one.

But this....this was perfect, simple, loving and right!.

Took me by surprise that she knew since i didnt expect that (like Harry) hehe, and that made it even better!.

I love this story and your portrait of Harry but also the character Hermione, how sweet she is, how much you can love her and i think she would love back 10 times more....

This just goes to show that even an AU Hermione and Canon Harry are a perfect match eh? .

Thanks for entertaining me!.
Author Feedback: Oh my goodness me. Flattery. It's all flattery wrapped up with wide grins, quiet laughs and that nice little glow one feels after a job well done.

Your thoughts make me smile.
And your reviews make me duck my head in embarrassment because how could I, how can I, and why do I deserve such...well, awsomeness?

So can I say thanks? Yes, I think I will.

THANKS!!!
 

SilverFoot
Signed | Chapter : 5 | Date : 04/11/07
I was actually wondering what kind of end you would have in store for me, a rushed one, a short one or a non detailed one.

But this....this was perfect, simple, loving and right!.

Took me by surprise that she knew since i didnt expect that (like Harry) hehe, and that made it even better!.

I love this story and your portrait of Harry but also the character Hermione, how sweet she is, how much you can love her and i think she would love back 10 times more....

This just goes to show that even an AU Hermione and Canon Harry are a perfect match eh? .

Thanks for entertaining me!.
 

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