TigerlilyUnsigned | Chapter : 5 | Date : 23/07/08
sweet. really sweet. I like the shy Harry. and the plot. |
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AlanaSigned | Chapter : 5 | Date : 03/07/08
oh no, I nearly cried when you ended this fic. This was pure magic wrapped up in a coffee roll and pure delicious love mixed in with a drink.
I know  totally corny. But I felt touched when I read your story.
It was utterly cute on many levels. And, Ron was an amazing best friend. I've never ever read a fic that had this level of Harry & other people interaction that seemed realistic.
Even your "other" characters were amazingly fleshed out! Thank you for this insight into AU world. Please continue writing great fics like this? Please? |
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This was such a fantastic read. I kind of wish it had a few more chapters! Thanks again! |
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wow, this was just such an amazing and cute little piece. really, kudos on it!
(going on favs asap! lol) |
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sorry for pointless review just want this back on my favourites list. |
Author Feedback: nope. Not pointless at all. Your interest got the creative juices flowing again, and it's been a while since I've written any harry potter fanfiction. So thanks, man. |
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GabiUnsigned | Chapter : 5 | Date : 31/01/08
This must be the 100th time I read this fic, and still, I can't stop smiling once I finish reading. I'm not sure if I have already left a review, but I have to say that you are really talented, and this is one of my favorites!
It's amazing how you can write such an amazing H/Hr story with so little direct contact with the two of them.
You trully ARE talented!
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Holy **** on a sandwich with **** on top!
Yeah, after reading conversations on idle things, I decided to look up your other stuff.
I have deduced, after reading only two stories by you, that you are a fantastic writer XD.
And you're Canadian too! Which makes it that much cooler.
But yeah, this story ... like ... isn't it what we all dream of? That chick that you see in passing that you think is kind of cute.... But, after that fleeting moment, you will never see her again =/
That's the whole point of stories though, to take reality and make it unbelievable.
Great job! Now, to your other stories! |
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chelley83Signed | Chapter : 5 | Date : 02/12/07
ok i don't like how the ending is because it leaves it so open but other than that i think it's really good...i do get what you were trying to convey with the story and i really did like it...i'm just one of those that likes the closure on things...anyways thanks for writing this |
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I was actually wondering what kind of end you would have in store for me, a rushed one, a short one or a non detailed one.
But this....this was perfect, simple, loving and right!.
Took me by surprise that she knew since i didnt expect that (like Harry) hehe, and that made it even better!.
I love this story and your portrait of Harry but also the character Hermione, how sweet she is, how much you can love her and i think she would love back 10 times more....
This just goes to show that even an AU Hermione and Canon Harry are a perfect match eh?  .
Thanks for entertaining me!. |
Author Feedback: Oh my goodness me. Flattery. It's all flattery wrapped up with wide grins, quiet laughs and that nice little glow one feels after a job well done.
Your thoughts make me smile.
And your reviews make me duck my head in embarrassment because how could I, how can I, and why do I deserve such...well, awsomeness?
So can I say thanks? Yes, I think I will.
THANKS!!! |
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I was actually wondering what kind of end you would have in store for me, a rushed one, a short one or a non detailed one.
But this....this was perfect, simple, loving and right!.
Took me by surprise that she knew since i didnt expect that (like Harry) hehe, and that made it even better!.
I love this story and your portrait of Harry but also the character Hermione, how sweet she is, how much you can love her and i think she would love back 10 times more....
This just goes to show that even an AU Hermione and Canon Harry are a perfect match eh?  .
Thanks for entertaining me!. |
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Hehe yeah regret...that one always comes back to hit you in the back of the head with a 2by4 *BOINK*, HELLOOOOO im regret!, remember me??.
So to be able to withstand a woman who could be described as sultry at the best is quite in character with Harry i think.
Looking past the crapilogue of DH (havent even read the book or for that matter HPB), i do think that he would become such a protector of his closest friends and lovers.....erh im rambling now....reading on!
Very nice ending to the chapter  |
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Dont know why but i thought that woman was Ginny...hehe, imagine that..
Must have been because of the Malfoy meeting and me getting them confused, HAHAHA, at one point i thought it was Malfoy himself using polyjuice!!...
Man...i gotta sleep some more, i am starting to hallucinate seriously
Nice presentation of the scarlet woman hehe, NOW BACK TO HERMIONE!!. |
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Feeling he already "owns" her does he?  i dont think smitten is the right word for him at the moment....insane would fit him more, so of course in this equation if we take out the divider and remove the plus we get insane=love.
How's that for brightness eh?....erh...ok i'll show myself out.. |
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Hehehe....so Hermione wants it MEGA sweet apparently  , well me too but thats just because i hate the smell of coffee but i love the effect....  .
I must admit that i have become totally smitten with your writing style, it speaks to me and also rises above what i am used to read, i would go so far as to say that you rival Rowling in making the reader come under the skin of the characters.
One does pity Harry since one has tried to be in the same situation, well when have anyone not been there if they were in love right?  .
Aaah love...the force of humankind, who makes people do STOOPID things and act all fluffy...!.
Very good start, i am reading on now.... |
Author Feedback: Wow, a review for every. single. chapter.
As of right now you're my new favourite person.
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StarbuckJrUnsigned | Chapter : 5 | Date : 01/11/07
I'm so adding this to my favourites. I like the prose, i like the way you make Harry think. I like the way you think, period.
I hope you finish your unfinished works. I'd love to read them too.  |
Author Feedback: Huzzah for favourites!
I'm working on "Torn" now and after that's done and packed away, I'll get right on "Lilac Wine" I'm so glad you're interested.
Thank you for the review! |
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