Yanks... they could never go along without each other... I wonder when they will figur it out... ahuahuahau, good, it didn't have much details, but I get it!

wow i totally loved this until the last little paragraph. the last sentence was perfect, but...
Harry held her at arm's length and pushed her hair from her face with one soft sweep of his hand, caught his fingers in the back of her hair, and kissed her...just seems so rushed.

Well, I like what you've done with them! I liked how you didn't explain exactly why the grave changed, so we can come up with our own reasons Good job!

That is really sweet! I can't wait to read more of your stories!

*%* Susanna *%*

That was a little creepy. The grave turned right underneath Harry's hands. Scary. Very good story!

Wow, that was so amazing! Thank you so much for writing that. I can see Harry behaving like that to protect Hermione and his heart. Well done, sweetie.

This made me really sad. I loved it though, rain...a graveyard...lovely. Much so. I thought the ending was both sweet and sad. ^___^ Very good story and I'm wondering why they left Ron behind...hmm. Well anyway thanks for writing it, it was lovely!

its a nice one shot (right?) you did a good job. i would;ve liked more, but it was ok as it was. good job!

very good story! the details really brought it all together and you made it so believable. the characters were very true to how rowling writes them, and i could definitely see this scene in the final book! great work!

Wow - that was really nicely done! You did a very nice job with this.

Well, i liked it very much!!!
But i have one question... Isn't Ron supposed to go with the two of them? Why was he left behind?
Not that it bothers me that he isn't there... But readers might get confused with the lack of explanation..(if they even care about him anyway )
-->Mage

Neat story. Though I have just one thing: the charm Harry used to blow the door apart is supposed to be 'Reducto' not 'Obliviate' That's the memory charm. Otherwise very well written story

this story is quite different from the ones i usually read but i really enjoyed the way you captured the emotions of the characters please keep writing more !!