What a beautiful little story you wrote. I like how you broke up Harry's awful childhood memory with descriptions of his actions, instead of having him just tell it straight through. I like that it's not too graphic, but I still got just how much they love each other. It really is a wonderful story, you're very talented, indeed.

Awwwwwwwwwww, i just love it, it was so beautiful and great, also how he opens with her and how much they love and understand each other, it was just perfect

I think that you did an amazing job with this, it was really good and very very sweet, i would love to see them spending the day with the kids but since this was only an one shot you won't probably write more, anyway it was great and very very good,well done

You bring me to tears with this story. It's just lovely!

A bittersweet story.. It probably true that aunt of his is truely would have done something like that.