LOGIN PANEL :

Displaying Reviews for
Shift of Focus

Total Reviews: 172

View chapters for a specific chapter:

<< prev
jump   | next >>
Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 5 | Date : 04/07/06
that is a very good chapter, after this one i really do hope you make a sequil because i would love to read with him being able to see her
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 4 | Date : 04/07/06
well i guess he told her how she felt can't wait to read more
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 04/07/06
pretty good i juss hope he will be able to see her again before the story is over and also tell her how he feels about her. even though she is dating ron and they are best friends
 

Rebound
Signed | Chapter : 6 | Date : 04/07/06
Quite nice. I woulda liked it if Harry got his sight back, but too bad. Sucked in Ron. Ciao
 

harrynmione
Signed | Chapter : 6 | Date : 04/07/06
The ending was perfect for this fic....sweet. I totally loved the whole story. It is good enough to stand on its own, but a sequel would be nice. I know that this is going to sound sappy as hell but if Harry gets cured of his blindness, it would mean the world to each of them to be able to look into each others eyes and see how much they love each other..... Anyways that's just me thinking out loud. Can't wait to read more from you, keep the muse happy and give us readers a sequel to enjoy!
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 04/07/06
tis good so far i can't wait to read on find out if he tells her why he wanted to leave
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 04/07/06
that is a good storyline i can't wait to see what will happen next.
 

imber de caelum
Signed | Chapter : 6 | Date : 04/07/06
Great chapter! A sequel would definitely be great, especially since this story leaves the issue of Harry's eyesight unresolved. I can't imagine that Hermione, the 'brightest witch of her time', wouldn't be able to find a cure. At least I hope not...hint, hint...Anyway, great job, thanks foe writing!
 

Emzki
Signed | Chapter : 6 | Date : 04/07/06
Great story! well done. Cant wait for the sequel! hope to see it soon!
 

Ravenclaw's heir
Signed | Chapter : 6 | Date : 04/07/06
Aww, I liked the ending, it wasn't bad, and it wasn't what I was expecting either, but that's good because it wasn't predictable Nice story, I enjoyed reading it and I can't wait for the sequel and how Harry's eyes are going to heal, or at least I expect that Bye now!
 

Francis_HHr
Signed | Chapter : 6 | Date : 04/07/06
This was beatiful really!!
Angst.. but beatiful..
I want the sequel soon!
I need to see if Harry can see again!!
Please?
Well.. I have to go..
But this was a nice fic..
really...
 

CathyD
Signed | Chapter : 6 | Date : 04/07/06
Very nicely done. I enjoyed your story a lot, and can't wait to read more from you.

I love the way you wrote their first time together; it was very sweet, and totally HOT. LOL Damn, I wish I were Hermione! When he stopped, after finding out that she wasn't even close... WOW! Lovely job with that.

Here's hoping to reading more from you soon. Great job!

~Cat
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 6 | Date : 04/07/06
Why a sequel for something with no end? i can understand *dificult* ends but this...you just stop to write.

A very *sad* stop for something that started really good.
 

logan
Signed | Chapter : 6 | Date : 04/07/06
Cute ending - liked learning about the stuff with Voldemort; now I'll have to wait anxiously for the sequel - do keep us posted!
 

xstar
Unsigned | Chapter : 6 | Date : 03/07/06
I thoroughly enjoyed your story and cannot wait to read more from you.
 

<< prev
jump   | next >>
 

Page generated in 0.00906 seconds. 215 users currently online.
Server running: Portkey Version 2, coded by James & Skinned by Imran(NAPPA).