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I found this story on somebody's rec list.
I understand why it was there - this is a beautiful and tender little one shot, surprising powerful since nothing really happens. You did a good job of capturing the relationship, the closeness between Harry and Hermione here. In spite of everything, Harry and Hermione 'work' - and that is why this story resonates. Good job. |
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Wow, that's so sweet! I love the way you write Harry & Hermione. Hermione will always be on Harry's side. |
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GabiUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 27/06/06
Lovely. You did a great job! Are you planning on continuing it? You should. o/ |
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aww thia was cute, i liked it!! is this the sotry that is the 3 chpaters one or is tis the one shot? becuase its cute either way. i liekd the way you decribed the stuff, good job! okay its going into my favorites now! |
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e999Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 27/06/06
wow. there's a lot of stories like this but, each of them had to much drama, or just wasn't as light as the mood wanted it to be. I know i'm not making a lot of sense, but this story just seems perfect. I wouldn't change anything. |
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Very nice. Beautiful & sad & sweet. I hope there's a next chapter. After that, what do they do? Where would they go? If Book 7 sucks, your story could substitute book 7 for me. |
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Oops... Forgot chapter alerts... So, yeah - good story. I'm excited to read more.
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I love how this doesn't seem... I'm not sure what the right word for it is... I don't notice any "good-writing" cliches. That's a good thing, by the way. :-D
Fantastic.
Good luck with chapter two - I'm looking foreward to it.
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Just lovely in that he calms down and completely relaxes with her there next to him. I like that they don't know what's next, but they will take it on together and that's what counts.
Lovely. |
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What a very sweet piece! I really liked it, especially when they argued about the bed, and yet, in true Harry and Hermione fashion, they came to a compromise. And it turned out to be a really wonderful one. Harry finally felt safe enough to let his guard down and sleep!
Keep up the great work! |
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That was so sweet! Please write more, I love the way you write. It's so descriptive and realistic. This little scene was priceless! |
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Don't want to say Awww, but will: AWWWWwwwww! This was so sweet and stuff... and a bit depressing, but still full of the sweet stuff. |
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usha88Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 26/06/06
That was really cute. I thought it was adorable. Great job for that chapter.  |
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Very nice, would have loved to have seen what you did with the other requirements. |
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