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I needed a pick me up and thought I'd stop by here for a refill. Always tasty goodness from your hand! =) Still love it all!! |
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What can I say? Found it on the rec engine...was skeptic at first because of the seemingly too sensual nature...but the last part about the eternal bond blew my mind away!
Great story, and I loved the open ending!  |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 11/11/06
Oh I loved this so much!!! It was sooo witty, so funny and sooooo sexy!! Loved ur vocab, the order of words, the repetition (Sodding Legilimens Ur one shots are soooo good!!!! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 11/11/06
This shit was hella sexy!!! I loved every bit of it!!! |
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yay!!! that was bloody fantastic!!! i adored it!! i actually laughed out loud and that doesn't happen very often!!! |
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CherokkeeUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 24/09/06
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Damn! - this man is a VERY cunning linguist!
LMAOOOOOOOO. This was great. I loved the running comentary and the was this chapter flowed. It was great. I am definitely looking forward to whatever you write next. |
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Anne USigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 21/09/06
Nice job. Lots of humor and great sex here. My only quibble is that the first person "voice" sounds a bit flippant for Hermione. But you've got a good way with words, and it's a very enjoyable fic |
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I don't know how I missed this story, but it was fabulous. I'm not going to leave a long review, because I'm going to check out the rest of your fanfiction. |
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bipsSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 16/09/06
its just right... the internal dialogue, the tenderness with which he takes care of her.... without huge declarations of love |
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lzodSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 29/08/06
Oh wow. Now that was brilliant. I don't know if you expanded on the marriage bond thingy but I would love to know more about it. *G*
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LOL wow u made this story sexy AND funny at the same time THATS AMAZING i loved it U have got to be an amazing author AND omg i was listening to aint no other man - by christina agiulara (or however u spell her last name LOL) and that song fit som perfect to this story wen they were ah...um...getting thier freak on...LOLOLOL
and hermione was describing it
LOL MY FAV LINES!
Have I said, ‘sodding Legilimens’, yet?
Bloody Hell! Pain – agony! Light from a hundred sodding suns is in the same room!
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Author Feedback: Hello StarofRock21!!
Thank you SO MUCH!!!
This story was banging around in my head since February but only got it down 'on paper' - so to speak - this summer... It was a lot of fun to write! But, I have to tell you that I was REALLY WORRIED that the whole sex-after-the-night-before cliche had been WAY overdone... But then I started to think: what if it were still 'night' of the 'night before'? And, with that in mind, the rest of the piece flowed.
The sex scene was hot - wasn't it? I was at first a little nervous about writing a sex scene in the 'first person' - and I KNEW! I did not want to do the whole pump-n-thrust thing... so that is when using Legilimens came into play - H and Hr could have mind-blowing sex with very few words to muddle up the works!
If you liked this one, I think you might enjoy two others of mine: The Price of Angst and Red Panties... There are two others in the Harder Night series as well... all I have to do is come up with a scenario for Ginny and Draco!
Anyway - thanks again!! Can't wait to read what you think of the other stories!
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 15/08/06
oh oh oh i want myown harry and hard fast sex. heh heh .... but i'd take dan all the same. LOL !  |
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Did I tell you this was great?
Because it is.
Very funny too. |
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please write more!
this was an interesting first chapter. very intriguing!
i can't wait to find out the details.
update already!
melissa
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holy wow, darn that was... wow! i can't say that i like the style overmuch, but i DID like the story... maybe a bit more fleshed out, with details and other descriptions? >.> but BRILLIANT descriptions you have there 