AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 02/03/08
Why can't Americans spell autumn the same as the rest of the world, and if supposedly writing what a Brit says they would never ever think of saying such a stupid word. |
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Book_bugUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 18/08/06
That was so sweet. I love when the paintings looked away and the part about running with the wind. The whole story is wonderful.
love,
-e.l.cluster |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 15/08/06
oh wow weee woo hoo i want my own harry. but i'd take dan just as well.   |
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Nice fic. Though I can't help but wonder what caused the rift between them. I have a hard time seeing Ron and Hermione dating let alone their dating driving Harry and Hermione apart. *shrug* I'm sure more than kissing happens on that couch during the night. ^_^ |
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Seamus22Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 24/06/06
That was sweet  And I would love to write like you with your choice of words.  |
Author Feedback: Thank you!
And of course you can write this and probably better, just combine poetic lines inside of a story plot. 'tis easy! |
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LiZzUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 24/06/06
That was so great! I just absolutely loved it! It was incredibly well written and just the sweetest thing ever!! |
Author Feedback: Thank you! I wanted the story to taste like sugar on a lonely day =) |
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ohh passions of the night eh?  he he i LOVED this story i loved angst, you are very good at writting, you are very description and i love it, i could litterally picture hermione and harry doing those thigns and how the scene looked! and also your very good at angst,m i started to get tears in my eyes and i dont cry easy there was one mistakje i saw, her eill point it out:
“You know this to be true,” Hermione asked?
there shouldnt be a ? mark at the end of that, it should of been at the end of true.
you porbably know this and it was just a typo but i thgought maybe you should know. kkays good story im adding it to my favs! |
Author Feedback: Yes, that is a mistake, I admit!
But thank you for the praise, I pride myself on descriptive writing and I'm glad you liked it! |
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That was extremely riveting. I loved your in depth descriptions of everything. It made me feel as though I could see every detail and feel every heart breaking, loving emotion. Great Job. |
Author Feedback: That means a lot to me, thank you. Sometimes I get comments saying that I am too wordy and dabble around in senseless chatter. I'm glad that you like the writiing style!
Thanks for reviewing! |
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Awwwwwwww...
That is so sweet!
I love it!!!
I can litterally see them doing that...
Also.. the part about Dumbldore was FABULOUS!
xoxo lindsey |
Author Feedback: =)
I tried really hard to make it as canon as possible, so as to create hope, however futile and oppressed, for it to actually happen (although it's quite clear to us that it won't, but hey, what can you do?)
Dumbledore is a character that can fit in any fic, for is he not the epitome of love and caring?
Thank you! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 24/06/06
Hermione swallowed thickly, “If I kissed you right now…would it complicate things?”
Harry, breathing quick shallow breaths answered simply, but with a small smile on his face, “Oh no Hermione…it's so simple.”
And he kissed her.
My fav. part.
It was beautiful =) |
Author Feedback: 
When I wrote that part, I actually didn't know how it was going to commence. Obviously, at that point I didn't even know the title of the piece. I wrote to where Hermione swallowed thickly...and then I thought to myself, "Now what?"
It crossed my mind that almost every fic, at this point have Harry and Hermione talk about how it would get so complicated and confusing. Suddenly, I was like..."No it's not! It's so simple!"
And so the story went and was christianed a name =)
Thank you! |
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Author Feedback: THank you, I'm glad you liked it =) |
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SakiaUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 23/06/06
Oh my gosh, that was beautiful. I actually cried right at the part where Harry and Hermione were imagining Dumbledore chasing the wind.
So amazingly poetic. I loved it.
Thank you for the inspiring read.
Keep writing! |
Author Feedback: Oh my, thank you! Yes, Dumbledore chasing the wind almost seemed to capture my heart more than when Harry and Hermione kissed....
Oops =)
Thanks for reviewing though! |
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aracneSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 23/06/06
absolutly beautiful, thanks for a wonderful read, it was so touching |
Author Feedback: And thank YOU for reviewing =) |
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This is a truely adorable short fan fic. You wrote it very well. I like the "so simple" part. ^^
Continue writing! I like it! |
Author Feedback: Thank you! |
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LadyreeperUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 23/06/06
There is only one thing I can say about this story: Whoa. You should write books! The story was so good! I wasn't able to take my eyes off of it. I loved the way you worded it. The love, the passione, the care... It was all so wonderful! |
Author Feedback: Oooohhh...my ultimate goal - to write a book.
One day, maybe =)
But regardless, thank you for the praise! |
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