Hey great chapter! Im loving the flashbacks they give a really good insight onto the lives of the characters!
Cant wait for the next update!!!!

hello write more. write more right now. if the rest is as good as this part it may become one of my favortes.

hello write more. write more right now. if the rest is as good as this part it may become one of my favortes.

OMG I want another chapter!!!! It's a great plot so far! I loved how you did the flashbacks, it add a lot more to the story! -Peaches9837

I really like it when are you updating??soon please!I can't wait for more!

Hey! I love both of your stories your in the process of writting. Im am a huge Lily/James fan and I cant wait for any update for your stories. Please update again soon. byes

Yippee!!! *dances round the room* this is DEFENENTLY one of the stories i'm showing Sanna on sunday!!! It's GREAT!!! actually, i think All of your Lily/James stories are great!!!! And i don't care if it takes a while to update, i'll read anyway!!

great story so far. there seems to be tension between lily and james. can't wait to find out what happens in this story.

I'm really enjoying this so far! The plotline is original and looks promising, and so far it's very well written. I really look forward to future chapters

~Alex

This sounds great so far-it's so different! Hope you update soon!!

hey, that was really good! I cant wait to read the next chapter!

I hope you get back to Unpathed Waters,Undreamed Shores really soon. But I still like the story so, you don't have to worry if i am going to send you flames or something other than consructive criticism?

Looks promising - I like it! It's just so nice to read a Lily/James story that is well-written! I have read so much fanfiction that makes me cringe...stories where I can't get past the first chapter because of the bad grammar, ridiculous plot lines, and childish characters. THANK YOU!!!!!
Lily and James seem to get along well enough. Why did they break up? I'm sure you will let us know in due time, you just have to make us suffer for awhile . I can't wait to read about the dinner date!

Ttly love! though it is quite incredible how james just falls in love with Lily and all of a sudden Clara doesnt see anything. I swear shes gotta be blind! I like the Lillakins! Very funny! I love the Sirius character anyhow! write fast! am ttly hearting this story!!!
love, marie

your story is definitely very promising... i greatly enjoyed reading the first chapter. your style is very good, i like the way you write very much (not only in this fic). i'm absolutely looking forward to the next chapters and to finding out more about what happened between lily and james and especially why they had a divorce. keep up the good work!