aUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 28/03/08
Finally! A fic that made my day! I loved that line: “Finally.” He whispered. He leaned over and kissed her fully on the lips. I actully giggled it was very sweet and different too. |
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I think stories like these, the quick beautiful love stories are just as good, if not better, than the long romance novel fan fics. Great work |
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I absolutely love this story!! It is so adorable!! I have read this story a couple of times, and i still love it!!! |
Author Feedback: glad to know someone likes it enough to reread, you've made my day! |
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usha88Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 03/07/06
That was super awesome. Ah...I do think shaving is quite bothersome too. Great job on this fic. |
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Very good peice of work. Every once in a while fluff is what we all need. Good job! |
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interesting fic... It was fluffy... liked it ... bits of a good laugh... awesome... good job... |
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Haha, I'm going to think of this fic everytime I'll shave my legs.LOL,Love it! Great story. |
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alayneniSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 20/06/06
cute fic. I like this. Shaving can be such a pain sometimes! |
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That was cute, adorable really.
And perfect timing the other day I was complaining to my friend Cassandra about shaving (I hate doing it) and she mentioned how her boyfriend alway's ran his hand over her legs, so she always made sure to shave. Ill have to have her read this story.
ugh sorry 2 am babbling haha but really though it was cute. |
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Manda627Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 19/06/06
Aw... I like it! The ending may be a bit too rushed for my taste, but that's okay - I can totally overlook that because it's so sweet. I think you had a great idea - very original (and *ahem* true). I liked seeing Hermione as the one without a clue... it doesn't happen often!
Wonderful job! |
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LOL. Cute. Just what was needed. It seems like for weeks now all the oneshots and completed fics have been angsty or tragic. It was nice to find a cute little fic like this. Great job! |
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bobozaSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 19/06/06
Very sweet little story. How many times have we ALL hated the task of shaving. Maybe if we all had a Harry in our lives, we wouldn't mind it so much. |
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Wow. I really like this fic! I normally just don't like one-shots, but this one..wow.
hah I also just liked the humor in it and the fact that it all started with the loathing of shaving. ::glares at razor:: but yeah, good idea, and good writing style, and good everything! I'll give you a 9 out of 10.
xox bingbop_02
p.s. oh yeah, there was just one typo..where it says "touch ever bit of flesh" ..I think you just meant every..just thought that I'd tell you..unless it's really hard to edit stories on portkey, then just leave it because it's not a big deal. But anyway, good job. |
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MissLexiSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 18/06/06
*laugh* Cute one shot! I'm with Hermione, shaving your legs is evil, but if you have a good reason for it... Great job! |
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Great job! I love the ending line! It's quite funny actually! I can't wait for your next Update soon!---Tiger111991 |
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