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Poor Ginny. She does not deserve any of this, especially when she is sensitive like that. I hope she will grow from this experience |
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what a great beginning! Ron must be taking it hard now that he has to "be with" Hermione. I can't wait to read some more!!! |
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h/hr4everSigned | Chapter : 16 | Date : 27/08/06
Great finish!!! I can't believe it's already over, and can't wait till I read the next one. |
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sherylSigned | Chapter : 16 | Date : 26/08/06
Nice end to this chapter and part of the story. I'm really glad that Hermione's got her memory back in this part and now the next one  . My favourite part in this chapter was when Hermione received that letter from her dad. LoL- that was really cute!
Looking forward to the next part!
Keep it up!
Sheryl |
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Miss MadyUnsigned | Chapter : 16 | Date : 26/08/06
Aww-- such a great ending to a great story! I loved the entire story-- especially with the angst.  Two thumbs up!
Miss Mady |
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Julie3291Unsigned | Chapter : 16 | Date : 26/08/06
That was an excellent last chapter. I can't wait for the sequel. Keep up the good work. |
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GREAT update!
Definitely left open at the end so I'm really excited to see the sequel to this. I *love* sequels. they're the BEST!
lol.
Anyway, go and finish what you need to do and then start working on that sequel some more!
Good fic. Definitely had its awesome climactic moments and I can't wait to see what else happens in this sequel of yours.
melissa
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I like the ending but I don't. I like the ending more than dislike it. Its happy ending but you could write so much. I hope you do a sequel. I really liked this story it is one of my favorites on portkey. |
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I love this chapter. I love how she finally remembered their relationship. I like the cliffhanger but I can't wait to read the next story. |
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lzodSigned | Chapter : 16 | Date : 26/08/06
Awww...that was sweet. & giving us those little flashbacks as to what went on in their relationship was great. I can't wait to see the next one!
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 There's going to be a sequel... that has got to be one of the most incredible things you could have said after a story like this.
 I'm absolutely in love with the ending, and all the little snippets of them...
 I still can't believe its done. This has always been one of my favorite stories of the past few months, and I can't believe it's done and I will never get an e-mail saying that it's updated...
But nonetheless I'm excited to read more from you. Great job |
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Okay, I'm reading a serious story and end up cracking up over Hermione's dad coming after Harry with a dentist drill. That was original! I'm so happy that Hermione finally regained all her memories (actually, her memories would make a lovely story by themselves!). I can't wait to read the follow up story to this work. Thank you! |
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finally!!
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ok, now that the tension is over, i've been wondering where you're from, i.e. if english is your first language, because you have these odd idiosyncratic things that are just the slightest bit off, so, generally in authors notes, not the story, but i wondered anyway |
Author Feedback: I'm from Australia and English is def. my first language- I tend to write how I talk, hence all the odd things... it's how I've always written cause I never really paid attention in English class at school about how things 'should' be done- my mum is always telling me off for speaking wrong... |
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greendotSigned | Chapter : 16 | Date : 26/08/06
Thank you for the happy ending. Writing in secret? How do you keep up with everything AND get it posted? Oh yea,there was the chapter secquence. As that is the only thing that seems to have suffered, then congrats! Looking forward to the "Rest of the Story"
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Author Feedback: Ah yes, the chapter numbers...  I felt like such a dork when I realised what I'd done  .
But writing in secret is very hard- especially when you're halfway through a chapter and the boyfriend who isn't meant to be home for two days walks in  |
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Yay! What a beautiful ending! I'm looking foward to the sequel (if you want to call it that) Loved the story, update with the next story soon! |
Author Feedback: Not a sequel... 'follow on'...
I hate the word 'sequel' on principle  Just me and my oddness... |
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