MionefanSigned | Chapter : 9 | Date : 26/05/08
Whew! Pretty intense. You did a good job. I can't fault the logic of the writing. It all fits nicely. |
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MionefanSigned | Chapter : 4 | Date : 26/05/08
Stupid girl, How could she not know that Harry wanted her! |
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MionefanSigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 26/05/08
This is a really good chapter, I don't think you got too much wrong here. |
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MionefanSigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 25/05/08
Oh, sorry, there's more! I missed the navigation button. Seems that I'll have to keep reading. Sad story so far, but good writing. |
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MionefanSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 25/05/08
I can't say I liked the ending. Yes, it's well written. Yes it's logical, but no, it needs something else, sorry. |
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dfcaSigned | Chapter : 6 | Date : 25/03/08
I am rereading this story. It is one of my favorites. I love how complex you have made your characters |
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great job. this story was fantastic! i ant wait to read the rest of this story! you are an amazing author and 1 of my favorites!happy thanxguvung by the way! |
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papermaskSigned | Chapter : 11 | Date : 20/09/07
yay! this is great. very good chapter. really very sweet.  |
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papermaskSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 20/09/07
oh goodness, this is very sad. don't get me wrong, it's very good, but so sad. are you planning on updating this? |
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Brillaint chapter!! Very Powerful and written so well. I loved the fact they are desperately trying to find Harry\'s magic through love. I wish I had written this story, that\'s how good I think it is. |
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You make me feel so old. I actually went to India on a gap year, and met the nuns working the streets. They are truly amazing, and I think you must have secretly met Sister Augusta, your mother superior sounds exactly like her.
Your writing is so soul searching. Are you still writing? I am reading this story in 07/07 yet I see this story was posted 6/06.
Hope you are still writing, if you are I will still be reading. Best wishes, Threesisters
p.s. I write under my threesisters name and Donavon. Do you read Nora Roberts??? |
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ArimaiSigned | Chapter : 7 | Date : 04/05/07
Tears in me eyes lad. I had tears in my eyes this was a good chapter. I don't cry so the fact that I have tears in my eyes is a good thing it tells you this in my opinion is not corny. |
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ArimaiSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 04/05/07
nice he he he I look forward to more he he he |
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ArimaiSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 04/05/07
nice he he he I look forward to more he he he |
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hartful13Signed | Chapter : 11 | Date : 03/03/07
great story hope i ill see more and thanks for the journey
Later... |
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