papermaskSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 20/09/07
this is really good. you really are such a talented writer.  |
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Its good.. really..it is..there's conflict that has been preventng the two to be together..good story...Even though the Heron still bothers me, it is good..and although the image of Ron being dead also brought distraught to my mind....and also the image of Harry being a man with greasy hair and a beard tied in a knot didn't put my mind at ease.......but you really did good...... |
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Hey I luv that song its so beautiful, goes great with the story!  keep it up, your agreat writter! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 03/07/06
This was sad but I'm glad that Hermione found him in the end. Angel is one of my top 10 favorite songs! It had a lot of meaning in this piece. |
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this song is really sad. i have sad memories from this song but i do love to hear it.
its so mellow, and it almost has a haunting quality. the way the piano starts and her voice.
its a sweet song. not sweet as in fluff but tender. i thought this was a good one shot. poor harry too. the fic really fits with the song you chose. definitely. it has that same quality. poor harry haunted by everything thats happened in his life. and then losing hermione like he thought he had. and ron dead.
WOW.
i'm sorry i didn't review sooner but i do like this one shot.
its very touching and personal.
::goosebumps::
i hope to see more!
melissa
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Don't listen to negative responses Kimmie, this is still just as well written and empathetic as the other stories - a darker subject indeed, but a reality to some, and you nailed it - again!
Love you!
H |
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jessie179Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 24/06/06
Mm, very interesting. Sad and dark yet very good to read. |
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it was a nice story. sad, but nice. i enjoyed it. and why was ginny there? sorry, i thought she ruined the moment by speaking stupidities...well, nice story! |
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lzodSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 18/06/06
Sniffle...sniffle...that was heartbreaking, him giving up all hope & thinking Hermione was dead. Ginny was no help, she has no idea how Muggles live & would have given up on Harry a long time ago. Very very touching piece.
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 18/06/06
Damn... as bad as it is... heroin is damn nice... you could be laying around in a room with your six best friends in the whole world, all of you completely silent, but everyone is having the time of their lives.
God, that sounds so skeezy. Glad i'm off it.
Let me tell you though, a crystal meth addiction is waaaaaaaaaay worse. Cuz then you're awake. REALLY awake. And you suddenly see no moral problem in stealing things to hock... |
Author Feedback: to be honest with you, I have no idea if what I've written is anything like heroin - never taken it or know anyone who has. I just know the song was about heroin and I used the mood in the lyrics to kind of guide me.
Meth is a huge problem and a real scary one. We've had a some horrific crimes caused by meth addicted men.
Anyway, I'm glad you're glad that you're off heroin and thanks for reading my story. hope you enjoyed... |
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Very sweet, and very sad, and oh how I love this song. Sends hivers through me every time I hear it. |
Author Feedback: Thanks Beth - it seems I'm not the only one who loves the song - so hauntingly beautiful |
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dumblesSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 18/06/06
Oh I love that song and I loved that... hang on... *wipes tears away*
Oh man that was good- emotional, heartbreaking and so sweet at the end. A perfect fic to a perfect song
Two big thumbs up |
Author Feedback: two big thumbs up!! I'm impressed! Thanks heaps for your lovely comments |
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MissLexiSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 18/06/06
A bittersweet story. I love the song Angel, it is one of my favorites and you did a nice job with this story. Thanks! |
Author Feedback: no problem - glad you liked it. thanks for your comment |
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Snif, thanks God that his angel was a live Hermione. Angel was one of my favorite songs too. Thanks a lot for give us your stories! |
Author Feedback: thanks Barbs!! And I've posted the first chapter of my new fic as well... |
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Not something I would normally read... but I thought... as it was you that had written it, that I'd give it a shot. It was very well written, and bittersweet. |
Author Feedback: Thanks for giving it a try. I just had spent a bit of time on your thread at the forum about the mirroring of the cho-harry-ginny and ginny-harry-herms relationships where that R/Hr shipper spoke up about the Heron term so it was on my mind. I debated whether to use it here but thought - the readers would get it if they wanted to and it was really a play on the heroin thing. There you go!
thanks for the review |
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