h/hr4everSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 18/06/06
another amazing one-shot.  I love your writing style, it always captures me. |
Author Feedback: Awww, thank you  |
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"The heavy wooden door creaked in the wind, unsure whether to open or close."
I can't tell you why, but that was my favorite line. I guess it seemed to show their struggle to interact in this scene to me.
I'm loving the angst right now, and this is wonderfully full of the good stuff.
Beautiful work, A.!
L. |
Author Feedback: Hello! Oh the angst, it came very easily this time. I'm glad it worked. Hope you're well.
A. |
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MissLexiSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 18/06/06
It's a bit sad not knowing what comes next - facing destiny like that. I think you did a nice job with this and I hope that you write more about what happened at that battle. Great job. |
Author Feedback: Yeah, it is sad, isn't it? And I guess it's the not knowing that makes a powerful scene out of the 'goodbye' moments, as we've seen in the number of fics written around it. Glad to hear my take on it worked for you.
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bklyangelSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 17/06/06
Ohh Wow. Please tell me there is a follow up or another chapter. This is good. I could feel the emotion. |
Author Feedback: Sorry  This is just a one shot. Thanks for R&R.
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You have such a beautiful, stylish way of writing. I just adore this fic, I only wish that the Harry and Hermione of it overcame their reasons not to be a bit more fully there at the end.
It's still going on my favourite's though. Thankyou for writing this. |
Author Feedback: Thank you very, very much. I'm muchly flattered to make it to the favourites, seeing as this one is a little pearshaped.
Ama |
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As always, and you must be tired of hearing this from me, but... beautiful. A trifle sad but a bounty of sweet.  |
Author Feedback: Gosh, you must be tired of me blushing everytime you say that!  Thank you very very much as always!
Ama |
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I don't normally read H/Hr, but this one sounded interesting so I read it and I really liked it. You did a great job with the both of them. I loved how descriptive you were and how you left it so the audience can wonder (and hope) whether or not he comes back. Great job! I loved it. |
Author Feedback: Thanks There's something about a good word from a non HHr reader that sets you all aflutter
Thanks
Ama |
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bipsSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 17/06/06
 super happy to recieve a author alert.... as always - wonderful imagery though i did not like it as much as "the locked room" or "voiceless"... the idea was good but some how the connection between h-hr did not come out as beautifully as it usually does in your stories.. (squeeks and hides behind the veil of constructive criticism  )
Still, always happy to read ANYTHING you have written ....
Please Please Please consider writing a multi-chaptered fic... "Voiceless" is till date my favourite fan-fiction...(I have a copy of it saved on my computer !)....will be super thrilled to read something like that again.. |
Author Feedback: Gosh, don't apologise. I couldn't agree with you more, as I said on my LJ, don't think this is my best either  But hey, I'm fond of it, my lame little hobbling one shot, not as 'perfect' as the others, but still my darling Haven't scared you away have I? Seriously, con crit is MOST welcome.
As for multichap, hmm, now, I can't say anything concrete yet, but, keep hanging there
Thanks as always.
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