If something in the magnitude of this happens in DH, no matter with what consequence (even though we all hope and pray for a good one), i don't think i'll be able to stop getting teary-eyed.

*fingers crossed, legs crossed, arms crossed, hearts crossed, minds crossed..."

S.

As with your other stories, your characterization of Harry and Hermione is spot-on. Both are fairly incapable of expressing their own feelings, no matter how exceptional they may be in other skill areas. This makes for a natural poignancy that you exploit to the fullest. It was a lovely story, thanks for writing it.

Another lovely story.
One small moment that perfectly depicts the relationship between Harry and Hermimone - he can't fool her since she knows he is going and he needs her to be there when he returns and she is certain he will return. Nice job.

I just have to leave a review. God, parting is such sweet sorrow. I love the one-wing snitch, It's like them, you know, one without the other would be a one-wing snitch, still a snitch but incomplete, unable to fly, unable to be. I wish you'd write many more stories. I'm in a real angsty mood right now.

Ooohhhhhhhhh, I didn't know about this one. Is this going to be longer? Hmmm? I heard hint you might be on to something, is this that something?

Of course, i love it. And I'm sorry to be behind in saying so. Such talent...

God, Ama. I don't have time for a real review now - must dash, but this fic, this little piece is... I don't even have words, just know that I LOVE LOVE LOVE it. I'm sitting here, with my heart clenched and teary-eyes because oh, it's so beautiful. And they're so beautiful. And her conviction, and his need for her. My God, the way you write them... it's plain truth about them together, about the beauty they are.

'She wouldn’t let him go just like that, would she? With just a sigh and sad eyes she wouldn’t even let him see?'

This is when my heart broke. I'm inexpertly trying to put into words the way I felt reading it. You know, it's like wanting to cry because of what lies ahead of them, and because of how they together make a whole, a perfect unity. It just hurts to see them separated. And the Snitch, left with her. What a beautiful idea, and symbol.

Oh, A. Write, write, write. Please. PLEASE. Wish I had time for my fav 'line quoting' part but alas, must go. But, I've left you a review after all.

You brilliant lady, you.

very well written... once again... you amazed me with your wonderful writing... brilliant work!!!!

I so desperatly want all of your stories to be chapter stories. I've read all of them and I honestly would keep reading all of them. Let me know if you decide to write another chapter story/write more on any one of these "one shots"?? It'd be greatly appreciated.

Just lovely with her absolute certainty that he would return. I also liked his obsessive cleaning of the bathroom.

Heya...

I love, absolutely love the way you write. "Voiceless" was incredible, and I love this one-shot as well. I can hear the rain pelting against the bathroom window as Hermione's mind raced with the speed of light. I like this. I like it alot. Well done.

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ooh - such a nice opening - really want to read more of this though

Despite what you say on your LJ, Ama, this is still good though I would agree it isn't your best stuff. The basic premise is well worn in fan fiction, but too often it is overdone drama--confessions of love, earth-shaking sex, or some other bit of overkill. This is nice and subtle, and true to each character (ignoring HBP characterization) which I always prefer.

There seem to be some more noticable changes from usual style. The connection between the setting details (the weather, the creaking door, etc.) and what was happening between the characters was more concrete than usual for you. I'm not sure if that's better or not from your perspective, but I prefered it. In a lot of your other work, you have these great details which do lend a great feel to the piece though I still have to sit back and say to myself "what is the connection to the story?"

Here's my favorite bit:

"Her fingers pressed the petals of the blue begonia, traced the edge of the mirror and, unable to find a purpose, fell to her side. Silence shed its old comfortable skin and emerged gleaming, indomitable. Not even the rain rose above it."

This is a stellar example of the blending of your poetic style with great storytelling. Hermione's actions speak very well of her discomfort while the following sentance brings it all home in a smooth, flowing form.

Great work, Ama!

hmm... is this a one shot or will there be more? definitely angsty.. will he or won't he come back.. I'm betting Ron would be blowing a gasket if he knew Harry was leaving at the moment.. nice job, keep it up!

Utterly beautiful and utterly moving. So simple yet powerful,hopeful yet sad. As all ways every word is perfect and the images and phrases more poetry then mere words to tell a story.
I loved how it was such an ordinary morning to do such an extrodanary thing, the finalle battle with Voldermort. {I've though about that too, how does someone prepare for the finalle battle? Have a good meal? Take a nap? Be sure you've used the Loo? Or in this case shave} Did Harry find it calming? Subcosciously wanting to leave his body looking its best, should the worst occur. I think few besides you would think of these things.
I know someone thought in the reviews that the H/Hr wasn't as there, I think its the more touching and powerful because it IS so still there dispite all the reasons to bury, to denigh it. In that aspect it reminds be of Paracelsus "A Deeper Love"
Wonderful in both images and emotions.
Thanks for this.
Tim

It's that simple. THis is what i just loved about this story. This is a great story! Even better if you're listening to 'Goodbye my lover' by James Blunt by reading.

I love the way Hermione was portrayed in this story. I just LOVE this.

Great job!

Take care and keep it up!!
Sheryl