Very nice. Ron was a bit goofier than I imagine and kendo wouldn't be very useful if you're holding a long sword or some other European styls sword but those are minor nitpicks. The core of the story was very well done.

The Unicorn

fantastic! poem!
and i love harry harry harry.
okay so you obviously know that since i'm on a hp fan fic site but still. i love him. and this is great.
and i love the idea of a deep poetry loving harry. yay!

I have always loved this story. It's beautifal and sweet. I always pictured Harry having something deeper inside him than most people can't show. And you got it exactly.

Sweet, and a tad soppy, but the poem was kickarse! The limericks were suitably cringe-worthy too, which was appropriate. The poem was genuinely excellent.
If you ever want to discuss poetry, come find me at deviantArt. I'm morriganscrow there as well.

Wonderful! I can only once in a while summon the romantic portion of my muse to the surface. I am mostly an action writer. If only I could come up with something like this.

Very nice, most times when poetry crops up in fanfics or even novels, I tend to skip over them.

This one worked with the story very well, I was most impressed.

So sweet! *coos* The poem that "Harry" wrote was actually really good. I'm assuming you wrote it because it fits perfectly within the story? Anyway, the poem isn't cheesy and overly sweet, it "packs a punch" and holds just the right amount of angst and sweetness (which is a mild sum up of Harry I guess). Yay!

Harry won but getting Ron the case of butterbeer because he didn't fall after the poem??? I'll take a stab at it that he won be cause he didn't fall due to the fact he was writing about Sirus and still kept a strong hold on himself to not allow himself to fall because of a loss but kept going on living, mourning but living? Maybe what I said is right but well gotta know the exact meaning of what you are attempting to say over all.

Very good haiku, it is my favorite type of poetry, but then again i might be biased by the generations of samurai in my family. Another good one-shot

just thought i would back track your other stories and ran across this one and the others .. seems to me that all the ones that you have posted so far that i have read can be worked into muggle summer . nicely. i loved this snippit.. meow

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW THAT WAS ABSOLUTLY POSOTIVLE MUST BE MADE BY A GENUIS BRILLANT OMG wasnt expecting that AWWW love love love the last line!!!!

Pretty nice work on the poems. I'll take Ron's first effort for humor value, but Harry's was definitely the more impressive. Nice work.

Okay I liked it, the end confuses me but I like it. Nice job. I understand Ron's trouble wiht the whole poetry issue, never understood it completely myself. Always thought it was fruity.

You have Ron saying "lets here it then" though, you may want to fix that to be hear instead.

Kudos.

Awww....that's cute. Though completely ridiculous.

I really thought Ron's poems were highly appropriate.

Really amazing, these pieces of poetry! Who'd have thought Ron had such a hand for the limerick - Australian pronunciation or not. And as for Harry - ell, he must be a lot deeper than most people believe, but this is jus about perfect. I'm still wondering which poet these lines remind me of...
PS: Now you've been doing portry, how about music? And I hope you'll not forget painting