lol I loved that! hehe! Another one of those brilliant little one-shots!!! You're a genius! Hehe... I still have your message to answer hehe... I have finals now *scowl* Grr... oh well... hehe, great little fic
Talk to you soon... I'll try and get that message answered... and there's a one-shot of yours I still haven't read *wink*
-Michelle

Nice but I had hoped that Micheal would have at least got hexed or something. He had it coming.

err... I completely forgot what I was going to say. I like it, though! (and hermione's ex should've gotten punched! leaving her for a skank... o well, at least that got harry and hermione together, cuz pretty sure hermione wouldn't cheat on her loser boyfriend...) (well, so much for forgetting what to say )

When I first read the summary of this fic, I MUST admit that I said "Oh, we've all heard this before... (insert random girl name here) gets a boyfriend, boyfriend cheats on her, (insert best male friend of random girl here) comforts her, then they end up in bed together." I peered up at the rating, not surprised by the NC17 at all. Yet I found I was in need for some smut, so I entered only to find that the story had been taken to another level!
Congratulations on this fic, I for one was amazed by the writing and the dialogue in this, my heart wouldn't stop skipping all throughout it XD.
Good job!

what an absolutely cute story !! it should be longer(or atleast have a sequel)

~conni

Cute. I loved it. I can't wait to see what other stories you have to read in the future!

*%* Susanna *%*

I liked it... its nice to happy stories on her rather than the usual angsty ones....would like to read more on this story though ....

AHAHAHAHA i liked this story ALOT, your very good at describing the characters, maybe when harry went to gte hemrione stuff, that aprt could of been a bit better. it was kind of werid, not really in tune with the whole story but other then that i LOVED it!! good job

Not realy sure how this could be rated R but it's brillante non the less! I love the coffee shop secne and the ending! ---Tiger111991

aw this fic was just too too too cute. I loved it.

I loved this story. It was rather creative in showing how they got together and in a rather believable way. Write more like it.

That was a nice fic, mate. Light reading indeed. Its only the naked Hermione in bed with Harry, "Platonically" that is,that kinda threw me off course. A Lavander-ish thng to do. Or even Parkinson-ishy in character.

But the ending was just wonderful. Good fic, mate.

Let me just say that that was a great little one-shot. The perfect amount of fluff for a mid-day break! LOL I totally loved the scenarios you though up. The way you had them flirting with each other was sweet and the characters were right on with this fic! Its going on my favorites list! LOVE, LOVE, LOVED IT! I will defenitely be checking out your other fic...

Nice work I always like happy storys thanks for the work.

That was one of the best one shots I have read in a long time. I love the fact that you didn't make Hermione be some shy idiot. You made her more natural and Harry was as well.