Wah, brilliant story! I love it! Definitely going to my faves!

That was an interesting proposal Had to grin a lot^^ greetings

Dialogue fit for the finest Romantic/Comedy! Any description of setting or actions would get in the way. Write more!

Ha Ha that was very cute. I have never read a story with just dialogue and no discription, and that doesn't really sound like a good thing, but you made it work. Loved the proposal!

It' very interesting. There are only conversations. This is the first time I read this kind of story.
Thank you for writing.

wo ho ho! very naughty miss granger!! lol! i luv it dude! ur a genious!

dude! the endind of this chappie is sooo funny and cool. lokkin forward to next chappie!

I loved how simple the story was--I liked how the dialouge dominated the story without being too boring or...well for the lack of better words to say...too much. keep it coming!

This fic is good,very very good, but like you said it is very much all dialogue. The dialogue, to me reeks of Sophocles' discussion with eurypedes, and apocheles, and the rest of them on Eros, love. It was cleverly written this fic, but I think if you got the idea from there youve got to site that in you authors note or sometihng.

that was soo cute! i loved it! keep up the good work, adn i loved how he cut her words off at the end. so sweet! keep it up!!

Awwww I loved it. It was so very lovely. Good job with all dialogue, too. I thought that was great.

Very cute. Your story weaves a quick yet wonderful upbeat tale of love. Very nicely done.

Another adorable chapter. I had a feeling that's what he was so nervous about. Hermione's neuroses were funny and then her acceptance was so business-like in tone, but you could tell she was squeeing on the inside. How cute!

Aww, that was very cute. I really liked the all-dialogue approach. I loved Harry's last line. *sigh* A lovely end to a very long day!

This was so cute and funny!
I laugh a lot, especially when she started yelling about if he was going to break up with her!
And this line:

- really wish you had never dated Ron because your relationship really buggered up your self esteem.-



see ya!