Somehow I missed this getting posted. Oops.

Looking forward to seeing more of your stuff.

You rock, you really do. Big sis is the best. the best ever.

really good but sad. I feel srry for those who dies in the war and i hope JKR wont kill off harry.

really good but sad. I feel srry for those who dies in the war and i hope JKR wont kill off harry.

Very good one shot. I ejoyed it. Full of emotion and a bit dark, me think me likes. Although the song lyrics are from the song "six fet under" not, "one last breath".

Oh my god! I love your writing, the story was amazing and I love the song!

I really love this piece, dear. I really like how you're expanding your experience.

Nice, I liked this a great deal. A hermione that doesn't back timidly away even if it would be easier, is very in character, good job.

aww that's cute. i just read a story before this whihc i wasn't too happy about but this story made me happy again becuase hermione and harry are togther and ron and luna, it was cute!! hope you write more soon!!!

That was very sad. All the cool people died. It was very well written. I am sad that everybody was so emotionless, but I guess that is probably what will happen after the last battle. This was a very real portrayal of how it wll be after the Last Battle. Great job.

Oh this was fantastic, It had this raw emotion in it that i could feel when reading it. This is a fantastic one shot. beautifully written.

Hey I loved this. It was very emotive. I really liked the correlation between harrys emotions and the rain storm. Im going to check out your other writings, I really hope they are just as great as this one!

thanks for this great one-shot, looking forward to reading more of your stories soon

Really sad...
I'm rather surprised that so few have reviewed, cos this is good.

good story, why does it say "in progress" instead of complete if it was only one shot. Meh, great chapter!