AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 16/06/06
that was really good and malfoy needs to be ripped limb from limb |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 16/06/06
malfoy should die a long and painful death because of what he has done to ron  |
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I really love the concept here. We've always known that Hermione is a formidable witch who can handle herself, but here it seems to be multiplied many times over and it includes the confidence and attitude to go with it. I really like what I've read so far and I can't wait to see what happens next. Oh, but one thing, and please, there is no disrespect intended, but I agree with the sentiment of others about weapons choice. A matched set of Kimber .45's would have shown quite a bit more attitude. But, this is your story, to be done your way, and as I said before I can't wait to read the next chapter. Excellent job. |
Author Feedback: Thanks I appreciate it. Yea, i know the weapons are kind of wimoy but Ive never written anything using firearms before and I tried to do a little research but it was hasty so ultimately it came out with bitch weapons. *sigh* but hopefully the next chapter (where the action is) will make up for my sucky choice of weaponry. |
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kasmira36Signed | Chapter : 2 | Date : 12/06/06
It seemed you would leave HER all by HERSELF, a genuine heroine no matter what SHE would do, I did like it! I did like your storylines and the way you wrote. Just wonder how wicked and cruel SHE would become.
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I would have expected Hermione to be packing a little bit heat then a .380 & a .22 plinker pistol. 
Something like a Browning 9 mil. High Power or a .44 cal. Desert Eagle. 
So Even with the wimpy firepower she has I take it that Draco is still a dead man. 
I can live with that.  |
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That was great.Thank you for this story and the time and effort that you have put in to it.Please ignore any and all flames.Enjoy your self when you write and have fun in your life when you can. |
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Nicely dark. Very OOC, of course, but that is the point, is it not? |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 11/06/06
So Hermione is an uber-witch and head of the auror department and Harry is this meek and mild wizard who goes along with whatever she says. I don't buy it! It seems like you've reversed the characters from the way they are in the books.
And what is the timeframe supposed to be? How long out of Hogwarts are they? |
Author Feedback: No Harry isn't meak and mild. He gets more action in the next chapter but this story is primarily focused on Hermione. They've been out of Hogawarts for 6 years but Harry defeated Voldemort 4 years ago. And the story is meant to be OOC. My bad for not specifying. |
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MichaelJUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 09/06/06
Great storie so far, now we can read the turn-around sometime. Looking forward to reading about hermione`s next moves. |
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alayneniSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 09/06/06
Great start! Can't wait for the next chapter. How did Draco get into Hogwarts? |
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kasmira36Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 09/06/06
It seemed that you do love to write the dark side of HER. Your plots and storylines were always amazing despite of its angsty.
Personally I don't like angst stories but I'll keep on reading yours.
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i'd say this is AWESOME! very intriguing.
it started off one way and ended in a totally different direction! thanks for the head spin!
anyway, i can't wait to see some more of this and i hope you update quick!
i'm anxious to see the next part!
great writing
melissa
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That was great.Thank you for this story and the time and effort that you have put in to it.Please ignore any and all flames.Enjoy your self when you write and have fun in your life when you can.  |
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