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i do love this story - just re-read it again. I wish you'd turn it into a longer fic. thanks for writing |
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awww, that was sweet. it was nice to see something without ron showing up and ruining the 'moment' but thats only my opinion. keep up the good work!! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 01/08/06
i would like it better if there was more than one chapter but i think it is still a very good read. |
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usha88Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 08/06/06
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"He pulled away and took a deep breath, still savoring the feeling of the kiss; it hadn't been fumbling or confused like his kiss with Cho, nor passionate or surprising like with Ginny. It had just felt…right."
Beautiful! Because it just felt right...is right for H/Hr. I loved how described Hermione at the wedding. I could imagine her being so lovely in that dress. 
Looking forward to your other stories!
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Sage ValeSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 05/06/06
Fluffy!!! Fluffy fluffy fluffy!!!!! I like fluff!!!!!! 
And it was just fluffy enough, without being total cotton candy. Just right....
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Author Feedback: Haha, well thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it, and glad it wasn't too "cotton candy." Thanks again! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 05/06/06
thats very cute, adorable  continue it more and see what happens in the journey, when they meet voldy and after the battle |
Author Feedback: Haha, thanks so much for the compliment and encouragment. |
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a really lovely one shot - thanks for sharing. looking forward to reading more of your fics soon |
Author Feedback: Thanks so much - I'm glad you enjoyed it. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 05/06/06
Very sweet, it made me want to cry. They only thing that got me was that the trio already decided to go together at the end of book 6. So ron would have to be there too.
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Author Feedback: Thanks for the compliment. I didn't really realize until later that the 3 agreed to go together, but I can still see Harry trying to go it alone. |
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this was quite sweet. liked how you wrote the characters, very believable. good work. |
Author Feedback: Thanks a lot for the compliment. Glad you enjoyed the story! |
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IBelieveSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 04/06/06
Excellent story. I miss the short heart-to-heart
Harry and Hermione stories that Portkey cut its
teeth on. This one helps fill that gap. Keep up
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Author Feedback: Thanks a lot for the compliment - especially about filling the gap. I'll try my best to keep it coming =) |
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THis is such a cute fan fic! I really like it. I like how Hermione's always so worried about Harry. It's really sweet. You depicted the characters very well in this fic. YAY! Go you!^^ Can't wait to read more of your work! This is defienetly one of my favorite short flicks. |
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CathyDSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 04/06/06
Very nice fic. This is what I'd like to see happen in the next book. Nicely done.
~Cat |
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LilsSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 04/06/06
Ohh, this was sooo wonderful! I wish something like this would happen in book 7... 
however, i don't think Harry and Hermione would leave Ron behind for a long time, so I expect they'd be reunited after their first trip to Hogwarts. Anyway, great fic! |
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I just happened to check for updates, and what a welcome one this was! Great job - canonical and everything! Congrats on your award - you certainly earned it!
H&H4EVA
Hermione Rae |
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