What in the world? 49 chapters over two years of writing and THAT'S how you end it? You should've included an A/N in this chapter explaining your actions. You spent two years writing this and this is how you end it?

OK, I'm giving my MOD warning now. The ending of this chapter is a violation of Portkey's rules. OK, I know some of Portkey's rules can be a bit of a hindrance to creative licenses but they're still there. So its either change the ending or start writing a sequel (and tell everyone that in an A/N) or face deletion: something I seriously don't think you want after posting here for two years.

Like, the end of the story?? There will be a sequel, right?!?! And Harry will be with Hermione again, right? I really hope you plan to continue this, as its a wonderful story (and you would be an evil author if you didn't) Please!!

Hello I'll keep this brief, I don't think this epic qualifies for this site. Ignoring the shipping aspect it was good but Harry came across as a prick, Hermione spineless and Luna moved to the front.

These reviews venting at you probably won't bother you as per your a/n from a few chapters back.

I would not be surprised to see this story removed.

Ah well it had some good ideas with the twin plotline.

I have to agree with all the other reviews, ever since Hermione had that thing with Daniel the story has been going downhill. It was just angst for the sake of it... Harry was mostly a complete dickhead, Hermione was too good for him then to top it off she's killed off lamely - which Harry seems to barely even gives a s**t bout in my opinion. And as a final blow to all the readers there is blatant H/L, do you even like H/Hr??

Bonus for us all = the sequel (which probably wont happen) is going back years with the promise of mountains more of Harry angsting all over again... GREAT!

freaky, you do know you've just set yourself up for everyone demanding a sequal for this fantastic story, right? love that luna's mother is named sacharissa- that's perfect
this was a fantastic story and thank you for writing it

This fic was great. Enthralling. Awesome.

But then something occurred and I am forced to use a title of a nice fic I\'ve read in portkey sometime ago.

UH... WHAT?

The drama was good, the agnst... oh the angst! every ickle, little part of the puzzle fitting at the right time. No rush, no second-handed storytelling. Just plain great story.

Your last chapter, is the precise opposite of 2 years worth of your own efforts. Flaws abound, and ones that we have never seen in any of the previous 48 chapters, or at least not at the same degree and extent. This was rushed, inordinately obtuse, lacking a great deal on cohesion... everything that you accustomed us, your readers, NOT to experience.

It is doubly infuriating - you disappointed your readers with a really bad chapter (not because it was not H/Hr as we came to expect from stories hosted by Portkey, it\'s just a pure piece of bad writing). At the same time, I can sympathize with you as to not knowing how to end your fic - I like to write and ending stories satisfactorily is always hard.

On a side note, and this is my opinion alone, I absolutely hate, despise, abhor endings that use a plot device, one that hasn\'t ever been even hinted throughout the entire story, just to suit a particular ending.

Going back to kings\' cross and all that time travelling nonsense which was never in a single paragrapgh mentioned in the story before (even if it was, I am sure I would remember if it was indeed relevant to the story) definitely laid the gravestone to this otherwise great story.

Final comment is: Great 48 chapters. Don\'t read the 49th. You just pulled a JK Rowling on us!!

i love it from the beginning, but as i read the last, its sucks that hermione died. and i thought that they would be together. and i dont understand the whole going back to fourth year. wth. and is didnt really end with harry/hermione. wtf.

I must agree, that this ending is horrible. What you were thinking when you wrote it, I don't know.

Wow. I must honestly say that was quite possibly the worst ending I've ever encoutered on portkey. I really felt that the entire fic did H/Hr no justuce at seeing as it was barely apart of the story line at all. When i first started reading this fic, i was completely drawn in however, with each chapter my excitement dwindled down. In the final chapter i was hoping for some sort of unexpected twist with some h/hr thrown in. Unfortunately, I find myself utterly dissapointed with the outcome of this fic. The final chapter had no H/Hr, but L/H which is completely ludicrous seeing as how this is portkey!!

Please dont take this as a flamer..its merely critque.

Sorry to break it to all of you but apparently Meghan is not planning on making a sequel... so that's that... we get stuck with the crappy ending and no sequel...

Nice twist... and the story continues... and here i thought you were going to leave us with an unhappy ending... silly me

This is finished? I wanna see Daniel's blood spill! The bloody git. :K

I read through that entire story in a single day.

I had wanted to read it for awhile actually but the relative length between updates kinda told me not to.

However I must say that the ending was utter and complete crap. Never in my life have I been THAT disappointed in an ending to such a promisingly good story. It had highs, lows, great lines, made me rofl on occassion... but that ending I mean really what the happy hell. Can we please not do that again? Ever? Like forever forever? I've so got to go read me an ending that isn't a "well you kinda won but lost everything so we're going to let you go back in time to do it all again mmmkay?"

That was a horrible ending.I really really liked this story in the begging but after a while is started to feel like a completely different story.I found myself just skimming through the last couple chapters rather then reading them because I just didn't care anymore.And killing Hermione?? Seriously???? I'm unsatisfied.

I'm thorn... I don't know wheter do hate or love this last chapter...

Luna's "goodbye" was terrible... I mean, it was well written, and it was hinted lot of times, that she liked Harry a lot... But...

Is she implying that, in the ney 'future', she wants Harry to choose her, and nor Hermione? Like Hermione will make him mild happy and she (luna) would make him great happines??

And, the way Harry died? I'm sorry, but that was a bit lame... I mean, Harry could kill Voldmort but was impotent against 2 dumbs Daniel Potters?? You could have had Harry commitinh suicide, since you killed Hermione (HOW COULD YOU???) but Daniel?? Not so good.

And the memories thar Voldie got, during the back to the past? Nice !!! Although since Harry couldn't remember that he used to love Hermione, once again I think about Luna's prediction...

Are you going to make a sequel?

It was a fantastic story, really !! I just got the idea that you were tired of it and gave it a speedy final...

Cheers*