So I'm hoping beyond hope that there will be a sequel to this story. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE?????!!!!!

I never like to read reviews until after i read the entire fic but after this i think i have to....

Now if only i had a time turner to go back and give this a miss.

Next time if you give up on a story, instead of posting dribble endings like that just abandon it and i won\'t waste my time reading it!

Wow !!!!! Great Story !!!! Congratulation its finished!... Or is it?

Quite unusual way to end a fanfiction. Usually ppl write about happy ending couse that's what we fans wish from the cannon, but you write an open ended story which open for continuation.
Are u challenging others to write the sequel?

You did a great job. Original plot and its wonderful how you tied up this story together. its brilliant. Summing up 17 years of neglect and injustice in 1 year but only write the important parts of it. Not straying out of proportion and you seems to have a strong backbone of the story so i never read unimportant things.

Please write more. I'd like to read your next story of Harry and Hermione.

Great Job!!!!

Wow. awesome story! I absolutley it! This will DEFINITELY be one of the stories I come back and read over and over again! Absolutley awesome. Thanks for the great story!

R U KIDDING ME? THATS YOUR ENDING TO THIS STORY? i'm a little bit dissapointed.

Congratulations for finishing the your. It's really a great achievement finishing a story as long as this.

Still, I'm hoping that fate will be kind enough to let me forget the last half of UH.

Fantastic, amazing story. I am so happy that I finally read this. You are an excellent writer with a keen talent for storytelling. In a fic of this length its hard to keep the pace going all the way through to the end, but your story had action and development up until the very end. I also liked how you managed to show a different aspect to several well liked characters that was not only dislikable but very believable as well. I can't praise you enough for this fic and I can't wait to see what you publish next.

I hope you get to read my review, Meghan.

Instead of naming all the ways and forms you just ruined your own story, which I'm sure is bad for you too, I'm going to ask for something:

PLease update this with an A/N explaining some things. If you think you are above that because you are the author and you don't have to answer for anything, you might be right. But we have been for 2 years of obliging your nick and sending reviews and nice words, so the least you could do for us is give your reasons.

I do need to understand why did the story end like this, why you wrote the last chapter the way you did. If possible, you could even change some parts: Luna part is just NOT fitting. Harry remembering everything would mend some things, or even abrief encounter with Hermione... SOMETHING.

A too much late warning about characters death won't do the trick, dear.

Honestly, this was a terrible ending. You seemed to have just pieced together bits and pieces here, nothing really making any sense. And nothing from the previous chapters even HINTS to this.

Also, I don\'t know if you know, but it\'s also in violation of Portkey\'s rules. So don\'t be surprised if it is deleted.

I...don't know how I feel about this last chapter. Seems as if we were cheated out of what was supposed to be the actual ending. Hopefully you'll explain why this chapter was made the way it was soon...

No Way!!! That is??? Noooo freaking way!!! A continuation is comming, right?

Well, this is one of the most great stories I've ever read, congratulations! I'm really moved, it was so sad the way Hermione has to go... but, I didn't catch the last warning that Luna gives to Harry... there is more in there? mmm... I need to reread, i think...

Well, congrats again, your story is a masterfully created piece

I think I figured out a way to beat this crap you've forced down my throat. The more I think about it, then more I think this last chapter was more about you than this story of yours.

Which is fine. You're certainly within your rights, though good luck with keeping this story posted. You're familiar with the expresion cutting off your nose to spite your face?

In any case, there's no law that says I can't copy every word you've posted here into a Word document and clean it up. Insert a chapter here and there. Delete others.

And as for the ending? Well, your ending was so poor that even I can write a better one.

After checking this site constantly for post after post of this story, I'm sorry to say that I'm very disappointed with the ending. I was very into the fic at the beginning, but then Harry became more and more of an A** and there was really no one other than Luna who became an enjoyable in the fic. Toward the end of the story I really just skimmed the chapters because of the strange arrangements. I mean one second Harry was with Hermione and the next he was out on a battle field or off somewhere else and between the two there was no distinction at all or a bridge to connect the large time gap you created.

The ending was very disappointing. Genius Harry gets outwitted by the incredibly big coward Daniel, loses his wife, might have a future with Luna instead, and has to go through all his angst all over again. It was just lacking, almost if you had ended the story with, "And Harry Potter woke up from this dream and ran off to transfiguration with Ron and Hermione" or something equally as lacking.

I know that your story is also on harrypotterfanftion and if you do decide to post a sequel I hope that it is a little better than the last quarter of this fic.

What in the world? 49 chapters over two years of writing and THAT'S how you end it? You should've included an A/N in this chapter explaining your actions. You spent two years writing this and this is how you end it?

OK, I'm giving my MOD warning now. The ending of this chapter is a violation of Portkey's rules. OK, I know some of Portkey's rules can be a bit of a hindrance to creative licenses but they're still there. So its either change the ending or start writing a sequel (and tell everyone that in an A/N) or face deletion: something I seriously don't think you want after posting here for two years.

Like, the end of the story?? There will be a sequel, right?!?! And Harry will be with Hermione again, right? I really hope you plan to continue this, as its a wonderful story (and you would be an evil author if you didn't) Please!!