Great story. The end was unusual but that's good. It's refreshing to see something different. It implies a sequel but since I'm not into fourth year fics this story doesn't have to have one.

One thing confuses me though. Did Harry choose correctly. Is this the option that would give him all the happiness he wanted or would it leave him mildly content.

A brilliant start. The ending was total crap--unworthy of such a story.

oh jesus christ wow, what an ending to one of the best stories on portkey, when is part 2 coming because this is amazing, please bring it soon, ive been following this story since one of the first chapters and loved it all teh way, i hope you jkeep ur style the same for the next story

from chapters 45 to 47 i think it was your writing seemed slightly different and not as good as before, were you trying something new?
keep up the good work
-Guyro

I really liked the story. Yes I was a little disappointed by the end by I'm also very glad that he got another chance to save everyone and had a second chance of life more or less. Ignore everyone that said it was bad. It was actually very well written and i rarely ever say that about peoples writings on here. You're a very good writer though and don't just because of rude people.

I actually thought this was a H/Hr fic for a while...
Then you start talking about how Harry's greatest desire is to be a snake when Luna rubs the snake.
This is a piece of H/L rubbish

wow, you copped out worse than J.K. Rowling with her OBHWF ending...poor wittle author cracked under all the pressure. Pat yourself on the back, at least you didn't actually publish this B/S like J.K. Rowling did with HBP and DH. this BS is just anonymous internet work, you wont have to tie your real self to such utter crap in the last parts of this story.

That was a great story. Too bad it had to eventually end though. However I wonder how the future will turn out for young Harry now? Will he manage to save Serion, Oorjit, even Hermione? Or will one of them still have to be a casualty of war? Even better will he still end up with Hermione or will he be with Luna? The possibilities boggle the mind. The end of the story is oddly enough the biggest cliffhanger. So what are you planning on writing next?

I originally started reading this story over on FF.net along time ago when I was moving into the HH ship and enjoyed the possiblities. I happened to come to portkey and found it over here and rather than going back to FF.net to read it i just continued to read it over here. I honestly believe you would have a better response from readers from FF.net had you only posted over there. They would have been forgiving of your LH moments. I personally think that Luna and Harry were the superheroes of the story and Hermione was too poor in characterization to ever compete as his love interest. I feel that you attempted to keep the ship of HH in a story which had long since evolved past that. I personallly felt your Harry was a bit egotistical and Hermione was too self deprecating (sp?) to ever be a believable and healthy couple.

I'm not here to stay how inadequate I believed your last chapter to be, b/c it would have been much better had you made smoother transitions and set the plot up early for such drastic changes in the story line, but that's why you have critiquers to point that out to you.

In my opinion you tried to fit your characters in molds that just were meant for them making for a very uncohesive ending, but I don't think it was a total loss...just not a complete success, but it's a learning tool definitely.

PK's Fic Admins (Adam and willlow.) have decided that this story can stay.. More info may be found here.

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So I'm hoping beyond hope that there will be a sequel to this story. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE?????!!!!!

I never like to read reviews until after i read the entire fic but after this i think i have to....

Now if only i had a time turner to go back and give this a miss.

Next time if you give up on a story, instead of posting dribble endings like that just abandon it and i won\'t waste my time reading it!

Wow !!!!! Great Story !!!! Congratulation its finished!... Or is it?

Quite unusual way to end a fanfiction. Usually ppl write about happy ending couse that's what we fans wish from the cannon, but you write an open ended story which open for continuation.
Are u challenging others to write the sequel?

You did a great job. Original plot and its wonderful how you tied up this story together. its brilliant. Summing up 17 years of neglect and injustice in 1 year but only write the important parts of it. Not straying out of proportion and you seems to have a strong backbone of the story so i never read unimportant things.

Please write more. I'd like to read your next story of Harry and Hermione.

Great Job!!!!

Wow. awesome story! I absolutley it! This will DEFINITELY be one of the stories I come back and read over and over again! Absolutley awesome. Thanks for the great story!

R U KIDDING ME? THATS YOUR ENDING TO THIS STORY? i'm a little bit dissapointed.

Congratulations for finishing the your. It's really a great achievement finishing a story as long as this.

Still, I'm hoping that fate will be kind enough to let me forget the last half of UH.