Okay. It's sad, and makes you think. It would be really cool for Harry to find something James wrote to him.

But are you saying James regretted Lily? "She was the one thing I would regret. The auburn-haired goddess..." I don't guess I understand that.

And the part where Lily says that about it only being one summer apart--the first and last. That's the only thing you mention about it, what was it? Where they going into hiding then? But the next sentence was something about how they were only seventeen; so were they hiding yet? Hmm.

Maybe I just read it all wrong, it happens y'know.

hehe, I'm agreeing on your H/Hr stance, I think them together would be rather dull and boring. And too much angst and seriousness.

I come on here for the Lily/James, and go to checkmated for my R/Hr.

Sorry that this isn't a proper review, I just thought I should reply to you somehow ^-^

Very thoughtful and different peice of fanfiction. I liked it, especially your portrayal of James.