Interesting start. Sex was nice and steamy. I rather enjoyed Hermione's inner monologue @ the end.

wow great that was awsum in loved it
keep it up
i can belive you used the expretion
he thrust home that just made me laugh
wel weldone

great, really sexy!!! I hope your write more like this one soon, take care

*G* I absolutely adored this fic. They both know the other so well, its funny that he knew she was already plotting on how to get out of the situation.

Lisa

Insanely cute and smutty all at once. How do you do it?
Err... that sounds weird. Don't answer that question.
Great little one-shot. Wish I could write these tiny fics as great as you do.
Ah, well.
Keep up the great work.
~Glitterfairyxoxo

a really nice one, please make a sequel and if you can a prequel!! please!! I would just love to know waht happened the night before!! Congrats and keep on with the great work!!!

For a quick one-shot, it was decently written, however, I don't think I like the message. I don't like how Harry took advantage of a drunk Hermione, I see it as very out of character. He's suppose to be brave and couragous, yet, he has to have Hermione drunk before he can touch her? No way. Also, I don't see Hermione brushing it off so easily. She was drunk and taken advantage of, by a sober Harry. I would consider that rape. She may have consented, but she wasn't in her right state of mind. So, she was "raped" by her best friend, and didn't mind it. Even if she was in love with him, a girl would still feel violated and probably repulsed. If Harry had been drunk as well it may not have been quite so bad, but you stressed that he wasn't. Harry's honesty gives him some credit, but not nearly enough. I realize this is just a short one shot, but still, I don't think it was taken seriously enough. Girls getting taken advantage of is a serious issue, but this story seems to condone getting drunk and letting guys have sex with you as long as it's your best friend. I guess we can all just be glad that the randy Hermione was with Harry and not Ron or someone, that would have just been outright nightmare-sih!!! Lol. But anyway, like mentioned before, it was decently written, though I don't really think I like the idea or events in it. Please don't take this as a flame, I'm just trying to get you to see where I'm coming from. If you would like to reply or whatever (even if it's to flame me back) feel free to email me at archie1077@aol.com. Stay Righteous!

*~Archie~*

For a quick one-shot, it was decently written, however, I don't think I like the message. I don't like how Harry took advantage of a drunk Hermione, I see it as very out of character. He's suppose to be brave and couragous, yet, he has to have Hermione drunk before he can touch her? No way. Also, I don't see Hermione brushing it off so easily. She was drunk and taken advantage of, by a sober Harry. I would consider that rape. She may have consented, but she wasn't in her right state of mind. So, she was "raped" by her best friend, and didn't mind it. Even if she was in love with him, a girl would still feel violated and probably repulsed. If Harry had been drunk as well it may not have been quite so bad, but you stressed that he wasn't. Harry's honesty gives him some credit, but not nearly enough. I realize this is just a short one shot, but still, I don't think it was taken seriously enough. Girls getting taken advantage of is a serious issue, but this story seems to condone getting drunk and letting guys have sex with you as long as it's your best friend. I guess we can all just be glad that the randy Hermione was with Harry and not Ron or someone, that would have just been outright nightmare-sih!!! Lol. But anyway, like mentioned before, it was decently written, though I don't really think I like the idea or events in it. Please don't take this as a flame, I'm just trying to get you to see where I'm coming from. If you would like to reply or whatever (even if it's to flame me back) feel free to email me at archie1077@aol.com. Stay Righteous!

*~Archie~*

In its own, this is a good story.
Main plot: Harry takes care of Hermione when she is unhappy or sick. (Summary without the important details...) And it is great how you describe their interaction as so caring, pure, and natural. And I mean the dialogues, too! ;-)

On the other hand, daring only when She is plastered is no great display of Griffindor courage. And "Get drunk, something wonderful might happen" is not usually a good advice, either. I am sorry, but somehow the lack of political correctnes bothers me. Especially as the same setting has ended in a very real nightmare for many a girl. Call me conservative, but there you are.

Well, at least your Hermione was (of course) smart enough to choose a caring drinking companion. Someone she unconsciously loved, yes?

great story. i was assuming for a while that she got drunk in order to tell him as well how she felt but i liked it.

i love all of your fics but i'm sad to say that this is the first one i'v reviewed one of the things i liked about this story is the way you wrote it it sounded very welcoming instead of the usual awkwardness that many writers potray when writing fics like this one thing i didn't like though was that in my opinion it was very short but all and all it was a very enjoyable fic to read

lol Brilliant! Short but sweet! I absolutely loved it!!! Very well written! And I love how it wasn't too complicated or anything...
Sometimes complicated fics are good, but sometimes you need something simple that just makes you smile! Fantastic job! I loved it!
-Michelle

Very good,i really like it and its so sweet the way he cares so much about that,also that she is starting to realize her feelings

Well done, you did an amazing job with this,it was very well writed,simple but sweet,hope that you keep writing and keep the amazing work

Once again, you've done it. Smutty goodness with a touch of fluffy sweetness baked at 500 degrees farenheit and you've got one excellent one-shot. Loved it

SQUEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!! i love this story! please please please continue it! i loved it....ahhhh im not able to form cohererent sentences but lalallalaa i love you.