Oh boy I so saw that coming, someone walking in on them. My question is... if they are together like this why haven't they gotten hitched? Anyways I like the new assistant as well and it must be really nice and they can Apparate anytime now lol.

Harry with long hair? I thought GOF was long enough lol. But very nice.

SLITH

OMG! This was THE best story I\'ve read on here in PK. I was like an emotional rollercoaster that I haven\'t experienced before. I\'m just lost for words right now because I don\'t know if I\'m happy that they finally got their happy ending that they didn\'t in the original, or that I\'m sad that the wonderful story you\'ve created is finished. Anyway, I loved everything you wrote. It was free flowing and didn\'t feel like it chopped up in places like the other stories. So yeah, I hope you\'ll write som kind of sequel to this story, or write a different one. Either one would be fine with me since now that you\'re my favorite author here in PK! Well, I hope all is well with you! And thanks again for sharing this wonderful story!

I absolutely loved this story from beginning to end. You did a wonderful job with it.
Everyone felt very in character from dialogue to inner thoughts.
The story also felt like a realistic one.
This is what an epilogue or a few years later should read like from an author. This story just reminds me of all the potential JKR wasted in not understanding what fantasy literature is.

Again I loved it and great job.

Nicely written and catching story. I have read it several times and still enjoy it.

Can i say that was REALLY REALLY REALLY cute!!
an amazing END!! sorry i just post my review..but i just got out for vacation..i blame collegue for not giving me enought time to read my favs fics...
it was A GREAT ENDING!! ohh i cant believe he build a house!! and the kids are SO cute!! jaja
good one!! cant wait to read more from u!
Malu D.

I love happy ending!!
The most mature character of Hermione that i have ever read. It's brilliant!! maybe it's because she is in mid twenty in this fic hence the mature character. Still, i think Hermione is a complex character. Many thinks in writing Hermione they just put some books with her or in lame attempt to grow her character they butcher her just like Rowling did.

Thank you for sharing this story. It's great and Hermione is beautiful inside and out.

This was a very interesting story and I truly enjoyed it. This is my first story to read here on portkey. Looking forward to checking out the rest of your work.

James

I truly loved this story - and what a wonderful ending paragraph to tie all of it back to the title of the story! Awesome!

wow, you finished it..what an amazing story..I had so much fun reading each chapter..I am sad that it is done but happy that I read it...I enjoyed your writing and plot...hopefully, it was as fulfilling for you....best of luck with future stories

Good story keep it up! I would have like to see more resolution on the ginny aspect but still thouroughly enjoyable.

Lovely warm ending. I'm so glad that everything worked out for the best and they both received everything they always wanted. Cheers!

awwww... that was really wonderful! i had fun watching this story unfold. i'm really jealous of hermione... *pouts*

this is very very touching, seeing as how i love babies (don't have one yet...). thank you for writing this chappie. turned my stressful day better.

As much as I like this ending with Harry building the house from his dreams, it does appear to conflict with Harry's response to Paige about making Grimmauld a place to raise a family in Sirius's honor. I guess they can live in both as the need arises. Still a wonderful story.

oh this was truely truely amazing. I had this marked as one to watch but I wanted to wait until you got it done. Excellent all the way through!

Lisa

what are the babies names, because in the first paragraph you named them james and lily, but for the rest of the story it was james and cary...