I LOVE it to pieces... it's so cute and fluffy and smutty and kinky and whatever!
Honestly, i really, really liked it, couldn't ask for a better one-shot.
Awesome job!

Oh gosh, I adooore humoristic fics and joking taht turns into snogging xD What can I say, I'm a happy-ending-whore

Great short story!

I almost died from the cuteness of that last line.

Great story, not too cheesy, but there was still some sincerity there and that was nice.

I'm definitely checking out your other work.

Very cute story you got here!

Gonna read the rest of your Works to see the quality continue!

dennisud

hehe... The Game. I love it. Hmm... maybe I should try that with my boyfriend I'll credit you, of course!

Great stuff .... now move forward and update 'Sweat of a Gladiator' I can't wait for the next chapter, sequel and other stuff that's about to come !

Another one of your stories that I absolutely loved! I'd love to see you write more one-shots like this... that'd be absolutely brilliant!
You are a fantastic writer!
-Michelle

DANG! that was a good one!!!!!!! and its even better if you read it while listening to GOD IS A DJ- by PINK try it

Haha, wonderful. I especially liked the end. And I'm glad I'm not the only one who sees Harry and Hermione as somewhat of a modern-day Tracy-Hepburn combination. I just keep thinking of their first little flirt: "Well whip it out, and maybe it’d hear better." That's just not what you'd expect Hermioen to say, and that makes me so happy. I love shocking people with some of the things I say sometimes. I think it makes sense for Hermione to need someway to relax with Harry. Lovely, fun, happy story!

This was a lovely story, i really liked the end with both winning. I wondered about Ron joining Harry at Privet Dr when it was mentioned in the book. I think you reasoning of why he didn't was very logical.

Awww! That was really great! You had a lovely balance between actual, current banter and backstory to get us to understand the banter..especially loved the ending (duh)!

that was so cool!oh my god im reading all you stuff and im loving it!

Oh I loved this! We don't get to see enough Witty!Hermione and I rather like her. I hate one shots normally but this was very, very enjoyable

Okay, so I mostly liked it. I liked the way you seemed to describe practicly every aspect of the story, it put a clear picture into my head. Which is good, I like description, it almost makes the whole story. The only thing I think you should try on is the teasing. Before Hermione did what she did, you should have had Harry do something, or like them exchange a joking kiss on the cheek. It would have fit if more perfectly. I loved the piercing part. That was pure genious. I give this an eight.

I'd have to agree, that is indeed a good way to prove they're each other. Another good one-shot, keep it up.