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Harry Potter and The Trial of Peter Pettigrew

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Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 5 | Date : 27/05/06
good ending leave it for the reader to decide... sometimes this type of ending can be better than when there is closure or w.e
Author Feedback: Thanks so much! I'm glad that some people understand that! I just wanted to leave it a bit open for the reader to decide on their own. Besides, it's all there if you pay attention, it's fairly obvious what he'll do. Thanks again for your kindness!
 

excalibos
Signed | Chapter : 5 | Date : 27/05/06
I don't know about anyone else, but I loved "The Lady or the Tiger". Trying to figure out the ending really helps give insight into one's own heart and motivations.

Just Like This.

Did Harry follow the path of vengeance, or did he allow the good in him to step forward at the end? I rather like to believe that he would follow his conscience than the hate within him. Great work Calmacil20.

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Holly Wood and Vine: where magic is sure to happen
Author Feedback: Ive never read "The Lady or the Tiger," but if it's the same type of ending as this, I'll have to look into it. I just wanted to give readers something that wasn't so clear cut; something that made them think, and I love the way you put it. Thanks so much for understanding!
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 5 | Date : 27/05/06
what the hell was that?!?why did you stop!?! we readers are not even sure what he's decided to do!!you're going to make a sequel..right??
 

husker_fan_2006
Signed | Chapter : 5 | Date : 27/05/06
Ok, first of all, I wanna say that this story is great, and your writing is awesome. However, I really don't like ending. It leaves you guessing, and you don't know whether Harry killed Pettigrew or not. And if he did, who did kill him? There needs to be an epilogue or something that gives the story closure. Other than that, great story, and keep up the good work!

husker_fan_2006
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 5 | Date : 27/05/06
All I have to say is that I wish that you wouldn't have finished that way. I think that you should add more because it doesn't give your readers closure and that makes them a little mad.
 

ladylaughalot
Signed | Chapter : 5 | Date : 27/05/06
YOU CANT DO THAT!!!

Update Immediately if not sooner!!

*Takes deep calming breath*

Well that was a very good chapter, you really know how to work the tension don't you. Um... ah stuff it... UPDATE!!!
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 5 | Date : 27/05/06
Is this like the lady and the tiger thing?
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 5 | Date : 27/05/06
That was great. Very emotional. But I have to agree with a lot of the other reviewers. The ending was just so off. You built this all around how Harry felt about Peter being caught and then when it became that he would be the one to give Peter his sentence. It's really not fair to the readers to leave it like that. After all the build up to that moment it was a let down.
 

FlameFlameYeah
Unsigned | Chapter : 5 | Date : 26/05/06
Great story, but the ending is a cop-out. Yes, we get the notion that he did not execute PP himself. But, the question still remains, who did? The question of how PP meets his end, is as much importance to the story that the possible romance is.
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 5 | Date : 26/05/06
wh-what?? why did u stop? nooooooooo now we will never know what he did, even though i'm pretty sure he chooses to stop, and go with Hermione...right?? loll
well it was well written and it kept my attention! great job! cant wait to see more of your work.
 

SeanWH
Signed | Chapter : 5 | Date : 26/05/06
I applaud your writing skills; this is a very well-written story. However, I personally hate stories that leave you guessing--they tend to leave a bad taste in my mouth, and I tend to get a negative feeling about them. With that in mind, I don't have much to say about it in either a constructive or destructive manner.
 

fashizzlism
Signed | Chapter : 5 | Date : 26/05/06
wait.... is this the end? it said complete in the summary thing... you cant end it here! one more chapter is needed! HHr fluff is needed
Luke
 

harry n hermione
Signed | Chapter : 5 | Date : 26/05/06
Ooooohh! I can't wait for the next one - there is going to be a next one isn't there??

He can't do it! He just can't!
 

ravensinclaire
Signed | Chapter : 5 | Date : 26/05/06
I usually don't review stories but PLEASE don't leave us hanging!!!!!! You can't end it there!!!Are you writting a sequal?

Thanks
ravensinclaire
 

Tank03
Signed | Chapter : 5 | Date : 26/05/06
That was a great story! I loved your characterizations and a really unique plot idea.

To be honest I would have prefered a more definitive ending. I thought that up until the last minute that it was still 50/50 as to what he would do. I especially would have liked to see his interaction with Hermione after having made his choice, and upon their arrival home. Not that I'm looking for fluff or smut, but I would have liked to see the conversation that took place. Hermione was so adamant that killing Pettigrew was wrong that she was willing to let go of the love of her life. That kind of passion surely must have led to an interestingly deep discussion. Perhaps an epilogue?

Anyway, that's just me. You really did a cracking job on this and it was a pleasure to read it. Thanks for sharing! I'm looking forward to reading more of your stuff in the future.
Author Feedback: Thanks for following along the story this whole time. I know a lot of people are disappointed with the ending, but from when I first started writing it, I knew I wanted to leave it open ended so that the reader would have to decide for themselves what Harry does. I mean, the clues are all there, so it's just a matter of deciding for yourself. Thanks again for always being kind enough to review!
 

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