WHAT!!
you can't just end it like that with us hanging. should rewrite it in a nicer way. i wasn't happy with harry agreeing to excute peter pettigrew. but the story was well written. i liked the part when hermione said she Wouldn't be in love with a killer or a murder but it was sad for them not to get together.
my advice is write a sequel for it.

Ok, so where's the next chapter?!?!?! You can just end it like that!!!

Okay... What. The. Fuck. That's the only thought ringing through my mind.

With a story like this, the author thinks it's good to stop and let the reader decide what to think.

Well, a little clue; it's not.

Readers become dependent on the author, since it is their story and so they should decide what should happen. Even though the reader may hate what the author does, they are still satisfied that it ended. This didn't.

Throughout the story, I wasn't happy with the whole Harry accepting to execute Pettigrew because of my own beliefs and feelings, but I accepted it because it was your story and it was there.

The ending - if you can even call it that - left us hanging, not sure what he'll do because he's become YOUR character, with YOUR thoughts. So you leaving it at that was just fucked up.

You might not agree with me and feel I'm out of order, but get over it. I found the way the story was written very well even if I didn't like the content of it. But it was left undone, which made it suck a lot in my book.

This isn't meant to be a flame, just a review, but you may find that I'm rather blunt and dont sugar coat anything.

My advice is to make a sequel, maybe not picking up right here, but having it even a few years later. Harry could either be alone, having done the deed, or with Hermione, having refused to kill Pettigrew. He could even be with Hermione and killed Pettigrew, whatever. Like I said, it's your story, so try to finish it.

Well I'm sorry to say, but this stank. Big time.

Not worth the read. Sorry

wat happened? did he kill peter? you cant leave it like that!!!!

Hm, I didn't really like the whole issue that was brought up about the morality of execution; it just wasn't that interesting as a topic for me. I did find quality of the writing to be quite good; it was picturesque. Finally, I found the ending quite appropriate. It ends at the perfect place, and there's no need to deal with the messy consequences that will follow, which would distract from the story.

Your a dick, and that is not an ending that is a cliffhanger and more evil than anything I can think of

whhhhhhaaaat.
you can not stop it like that.
nope.
no.
nope.
can not.
i'm going to assume that since it was hermione that he saw and not his mother that he heard before he opened his eyes that he didn't kill pettigrew.
please?
okay.
sounds good.

man, okay, so its 222am.. hey, thats nifty.. well, okay, so, its early in the morning and youve still managed to capture my attention thus far in this story-- my stomach even clenched when i read that last line.

Wow, that was good. I think that I agree with some of the others, this is very similar to "The Lady or the Tiger." You said that you haven't read it, so I googled it and here is the link. http://www.eastoftheweb.com/short-stories/UBooks/LadyTige.shtml I hope you like it.

LOL Fabulous ending! This is a terrific fic, and I love that you left the ending like that. (Though my first thought was "No! You can't leave it like that!" LOL) Harry's emotions are very clear, and I can almost feel them with him.

I loved when Hermione told him that she wouldn't be in love with a murderer. Love the shock value of it, cuz you can't always tell the person you're in love with them in a romantic setting, so this was great.

Anyway, just wanted to say I love the story, especially the ending. Great job!

~Cat

WHAT! it's OVER?! sheesh, i had to go back to the main page and see whether or not you had this thing completed cuz... that'd be an evil cliffhanger, just so you know... ok, so pretty sure harry wouldn't kill him so that he could be with hermione, but you've got the "ha ha, you'll never freakin know!" thingy going on here! and now i'm not sure *what* i think harry's decision will be... because he's probably feeling the same way most of the readers were after hermione's visit to harry. at first i thought hermione was nuts for going to visit peter on... "desolation row"(i hope i got that right...? not even going to ask how you came up with that. but it does make sense to have a sort of "in-between). i love how she stands up for herself and what's right, though (umm, "S.P.E.W." much? lol)
overall, i really enjoyed reading this (well, as much as you can "enjoy" drama instead of "revelling" in it or whatever, lol)

hey!!! y did that date had 2 be 23rd of july??? u spoiled r favourite dan's b'day! i wish u'd written the end "properly" and "completely"......

awesome... sorry if im reviewing just the last chappy but I read all of them... some have typos but all in all the story was great... it's actually very canon based because of your depiction of passed happenings in the previous books... you didn't delve on the possible book 7 events which is also good because it can also work possible even after book 7 comes out... good job!!!!

ahhh!!! i want to know what happens!!! will there be an epilogue? i hope so. good job on the story