This story was amazing! It was hilarious I love how they characters all have their own personalities, and the banter between Lily and James was well portrayed.

Great job!!! I it!!!!! Keep up the good work

Pomfrey is on strike?! This is one of the best humor stories that I've ever read(mostly because usually other humor stories are way to over the top with cheap laughs and OOC abound)But with Lily and Horatio(hey that is fun to say)eh...hem..I mean James stories,you don't have to worry about them being OOC,you barely know anything about them.

I loved Lily's riveting speech about James' hair..

'They were brittle because you constantly ran your hand through them,but they were strong and shining'

Oh, that was hilarious! I have to say that was the most unusual and highly entertaining J/L I have read. I like the sassy-ness of Lily. Good job.

OH! Nice way to describe her rear end... her chocolate side... omg!! I practically spit cola on the monitor! THIS was BETTER than the last chapter (and that one was great).

This really cracked me up. I can really picture this haughty, forceful, self-assured Lily in struggle with James. They are stuck at the bum! /tears/ I laughed so hard my side hurts. Keep up the good work.

i loved it!
oh well im supposed to write more so...
lily's character is really amazing, wd wd

This was you're best chapter. I laughed out loud when I got to the last paragraph. *evil grin* It was the perfect ending.

Madam Pomfrey is on strike. Not you're just being mean. Tremendously funny, but very mean.

Shall I take a look? Now that is brave. Stupid of him. But very brave.

Some people can't write comedy to save their lives, but you are fantastic at it.

Horatio. So cruel! Funny though. I love it. You've got James and Lily stuck cheek to cheek. Sorry. I know that's a terrible pun. I had to say it.

This fic is Very original. Bravo.

Oh my God! You are brilliant, you know that? It was awesome! Is it the end or is it going to continue? Somehow, I think it is not completed so I'll be looking forward to the update.

Oh, boy! It is sooo good I can't even say how good it is! Anyways, I love your writing style and I am going to check out your other stories i.e. if you have any. Oh, by the way, brilliant chapter.

Oh, that was awesome! It was absolutely one of the most funniest fic, I have ever read. Good one!

Oh, this was hilarious, I am definitely going to read the next chapter. It was fun really.