CathyDSigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 04/06/06
WOW. I'm just pretty much speachless right now.
This was amazing, and heartbreaking, and wow... I can hardly see through the tears in my eyes right now.  The last sentence in both chapters was the single most heartbreaking thing I've read in a long time, and the thing that got me the most. Wonderful job.
Thanks for writing something so emotional, and stirring. I can't wait to read more of your work. 
~Cat |
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Oh my! That last few paragraphs just were full of the most tearjerking imagery. |
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BethanyUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 27/05/06
oh my god!!!! that is soooooooooo sad! i absolutely luv it! awesome first chapter! |
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That was quite profoundly and touchingly sad. The title alone signifies a lot of things...the moment of the spell, the look shared, the moment to let go...amazing! 
I am lookinf forward to your other stories. I hope next time, there's a happy ending?  |
Author Feedback: Thank you. I don't normally write stuff this sad/dark, but I wanted to see if I could do it. I'm very glad you caught on to all the different moments that the title refers too - bravo you! Next time, the ending should be happier, yes =) |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 23/05/06
i absolutely love this story! its one of the best ive read! |
Author Feedback: Wow, thank you very much! That's quite a compliment! I'm glad you enjoyed it! |
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I enjoyed this quite a lot with the two endings and different perspectives. Very sad though, so I sorta hope JKR doesn't take that route!!! Keep up the good work! ~Ronnie |
Author Feedback: I really, really hope JKR doesn't take this route either; this was more me seeing how dark I could write, and trying to show how important a single moment can be. I'm glad you liked it, and thanks for reviewing! |
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Tank03Signed | Chapter : 2 | Date : 23/05/06
This is why I usually don't read angst. This was sad beyond mention- well written- but sad. Now I know that when your future works are catagorized as "angst", you really mean it. Again, well written, but a bit to sorrowful for my taste. |
Author Feedback: Yeah, I normally don't write stuff this dark, it more of an experiment to see if I could =) Don't worry, the majority of stuff I post, even if labeled "angst" isn't this bleak. Should be posting something new soon! |
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DayaUnsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 22/05/06
No, which chapter is the true one. Which person died. You can't leave it like this  That was so sad. I loved it write more asap. |
Author Feedback: Haha, sorry to leave you hanging there =) With these stories, I don't think it's so much about which one is the "true" one, but rather, as the title implies, how important one moment can be. I usually don't go for sad like this, so you won't see it too much from me, but it was something I wanted to try. I'm glad you liked it, and thanks for reviewing. |
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