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saleth
Unsigned | Chapter : 25 | Date : 21/08/09
Amazing, this has to be one of the greates fic that I have ever read, is truly wondefull.
All the characters, the usual ones and the ones that you've created are really perfect in the story.
The plot about Voldemort, the horcruxes and the final battle is really believable. The romance between Harry and Hermione is just right, is like it was supossed to happen in the books, and the explanation for the relationship between Harry and Ginny was even better.
At the end is a really good fic, I hope you'll write something more, although since you wrote this in 2006, i'm not so hopeful, but still I figured that a review was necessary for a story so good as this one.
Author Feedback: Thank you so much! I am still writing, although I took something of an extended hiatus (*cough*two years*cough cough*). Going On is currently being updated and Unchain My Heart will be out in a few months. I hope you enjoy them both!

I greatly appreciate your review, especially your enjoyment of my characters.
 

Evernight
Signed | Chapter : 25 | Date : 16/08/09
Hello there, I found this fic a couple of weeks ago, and since then I've been reading one or two chapters per day. It was a good experience, and except for a detail or two a very well writen fic. Congratulations and I look forward to read more of your work (I know you are writing Going On, but I think I'll wait until it's finished before I start reading).
Author Feedback: Thanks for that. I really appreciate it.

Going On should be finished in early October. I hope you'll also check out "Unchain My Heart", the fic I'll be writing after that.

You have my sincere gratitude for reading and reviewing. Here's hoping I hear from you again.

ITL
 

LoKi_Manifest
Signed | Chapter : 25 | Date : 09/08/09
Just read this story through in one night and I have to admit it was well written/plotted and kept me glued to my screen for a couple of hours! Thanks for the good story!
Author Feedback: You are entirely welcome! I applaud your ability to read the whole story in one night and thank you muchly for your kind words.

ITL
 

Megan
Unsigned | Chapter : 25 | Date : 08/08/09
I have to say, out of the thousands of fics I've undoubtedly read over the years, this is the most well thought out fic I think I've ever read. You managed to incorporate canon fact into your own entirely believable plot. I applaud your story. Wonderful job, truly wonderful.
Author Feedback: Thank you for this very kind review. I'm thrilled you took the time to read it and that you enjoyed it so much.

Warning: Shameless plug ahead!

If you liked "Off Balance", I urge you to read "Unchain My Heart" when it comes out in a few months. I don't want to give much away right now, but I'm quite proud of what I have so far.

Thanks for the great review!

ITL
 

jimmycranberry
Signed | Chapter : 23 | Date : 28/07/09
As per my previous review - I was very grumpy that day, and I think I'll be getting 'round to reading the conclusion of this once I finish with what I'm currently reading. Happy writing!
Author Feedback: No problem. I hope you enjoy!

ITL
 

Discount Ninja
Signed | Chapter : 25 | Date : 27/07/09
Ahem, I forgot to add it to my favourites =D So, this review is for that purpose =D
D,
Author Feedback: Fine by me. Thanks again for reviewing.
 

Discount Ninja
Signed | Chapter : 25 | Date : 27/07/09
Damn, that was good =D this is the post-HBP story I have been searching for for such a long time - it has plot (an incredible one for that matter), the proper romance, some happy endings, some sad endings, some endings unwritten (personally, I thought that your portrayal of Snape was splendid - the best I have ever seen him done, a Harry Potter hating enigma right until the end) and your origional characters are believable, have names that fit in, etc

The only thing that even seemed a bit odd to me was that Professor Vectors betrayal was a bit too hard to have been worked out, I feel =P but otherwise pure triumph =P

I must say, that Septimus Prince and Tom Riddle ending up living in Ron and Harry was a touch of genious that I absolutly adore =D

My best and fondest wishes for my favourite HP story ever,
Discount
Author Feedback: Thank you so much for writing such a well thought out review! You have no idea how much I appreciate it. I'm stoked that you appreciated my rendition of Snape and humbly honored that this is your favorite HP story ever.

I encourage you to read "Unchain My Heart" when it comes out. It has more in common with "Off Balance" than "Going On" does.

Thanks for the fantastic review!

ITL
 

jimmycranberry
Signed | Chapter : 23 | Date : 25/07/09
*sigh* Well, until this chapter, it was a fantastic story. Fun to read, written very well, and with an absorbing plot. Sadly, it seems as if you rushed this one. Once dear Bella (my fave Death Eater ) walked in randomly, I gave up. Real shame, since it was going so well until then.

Best of luck with all your other stories!
Author Feedback: Walked in randomly? She was impersonating Tonks.

Sorry this chapter ruined the story for you, but I don't feel I rushed anything. Thanks for taking the time to review.
 

filkertom
Unsigned | Chapter : 25 | Date : 16/04/09
I know this is well after your original posting, but... I just found this last night, and stayed up until almost 4:00 a.m. reading it, and finished it this afternoon. Very well done. A great read. (And thanks for having something about the gum wrappers!)
Author Feedback: I thank you and bow to your ability to read the story all in one sitting. I don't think I'd have the patience to do it myself. As to the gum wrappers, I tried to tie up as many loose ends as I could. I don't think I succeeded entirely, but I'm glad you enjoyed one of my attempts anyway.

Thanks muchly for taking the time to review! I appreciate all reviews, no matter when they're posted.

ITL
 

HJGrangerrocks
Signed | Chapter : 25 | Date : 11/03/09
You wrote a wonderful story thank you for sharing. I've enjoyed reading it.
Author Feedback: I certainly had no intention of keeping "Off Balance" to myself. I'm very glad you enjoyed it.

ITL
 

Raven3182
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 16/01/09
Great Story! I simply loved each and every single minute of it!
Author Feedback: I'm quite glad you did. Thanks for leaving a review!
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 25 | Date : 08/01/09
This really is a great story. The characters are spot on and the plot certainly grabs your attention and keeps you guessing as to what will happen next. You also managed to escape a lot of over done cliches in the Harry Potter fanfic universe, like super training sessions, etc. I had a great time reading this. You're clearly a talented writer. Thank you very much!
Author Feedback: And thank you for leaving this fine review!

Every story that I write is character-based because I feel if you don't connect with the characters you're not really going to enjoy the story. I dislike cliches and don't pay much attention to what others have done before me. I like to do my own thing.

I very much appreciate your extremely kind remarks. Thank you again!
 

lnkmstr10
Signed | Chapter : 25 | Date : 01/01/09
Ah, I love this story. Does my heart good It was so brilliant. I know I've read it at least once before and it doesn't get old at all.
Author Feedback: Wow! I'm extremely glad to hear that. I'm very fond of the idea of this story being reread.

Thank you muchly!

ITL
 

TiredEyes
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 02/12/08
Wow! *_* I\'ll definetly keep reading! So far so good! Hope to have the time soon!
Author Feedback: Thanks! Hope you kept reading.

ITL
 

HPHGharmony
Signed | Chapter : 25 | Date : 27/10/08
truly one of the greatest storys ive had the plesure of reading i look forward to reading more of your work
Author Feedback: Thanks so much for that!

More will come. Just be patient (like very, very patient).

ITL
 

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